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Reviewer: SilverWerewolf
Date: 02/01/13 0:21
Chapter: Badgering Bellatrix

About chapter five- bellatrix was seven or eight years older than Sirius, so she can't be his little cousin and probably wasn't at Hogwarts at the same time as him. Other than that great

Reviewer: Lily_Jean_Weasley95
Date: 02/18/12 2:45
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

OH MY GOSH!!!! I loved this story! I lost sleep for this story, the day before my Algebra II midterm (And I suck at algebra with full sleep). I couldn't stop reading. I always loved the "Things I am not allowed to do at Hogwarts" list, and this story really made them come to life, and added more to. Yay Marauders!!!! :)

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 12/12/11 12:08
Chapter: Mum's Assignment

Greetings! It's me again, come back for some more of this fantabulous story. I absolutely love a story that makes me laugh and they are becoming increasingly rare. Yet you manage to make me laugh every time and your lines are so inventive and original. I will be browsing the Authors category for your name to seek out any unread stories of yours, but that's for later. Right now I will continue on because I will never get tired of my all-time favourite Marauder story.

Reviewer: bloodshedprincess
Date: 10/06/11 6:41
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

That made me wet my pants. The whole book. Every word. AMAZING

Reviewer: Maggie_Weasley-Tonks
Date: 09/30/11 19:31
Chapter: Midnight Serenade

Omg I love Dancing Queen! Makes me think of my cousin's wedding. Erm... That was random but yeah I rlly like this fic so far!

Reviewer: Maggie_Weasley-Tonks
Date: 09/30/11 19:15
Chapter: Mum's Assignment

Like it! But just saying, Lily would be in transfiguration with them, since they are all Gryffindors. Good start to the story though!

Reviewer: GinnyPottterGranger
Date: 09/30/11 18:56
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

i changed my mind- this is my favorite chapter!

Reviewer: sunshinesparkles
Date: 09/30/11 8:29
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

Oh. My. Gosh. I loved this story! It was so funny that I was laughing out loud (making my teacher suspicious of why I wasn't writing an essay ;) ) !

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 3:44
Chapter: A Legacy Left Behind

I followed you all the way through and I'm glad that I invested my time here. I enjoyed your views on how Marauder life would have been and applaud you for your funny, albeit twisted, sense of humor! Thank you for writing and sharing, your story is now, officially, branded Perfect in the eyes of Erised.

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 3:14
Chapter: Princesses and Professor McGonagalls

Fantastic end to the list! I'm sure McGonagall will be delighted to pass on the helpful hints, given by Sirius, to her new first years!

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 2:52
Chapter: Purple Hazing

The best till last? And I thought you couldn't find any more hilarious! Can't wait to see what your genius mind comes up with next…

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 2:40
Chapter: Ooh, Barracuda

Awww, I find that sort of sad, #54 - Not allowed to be myself. But, Lively, I must tell you that you are correct in thinking that this chapter wasn't the best work you've ever done but don't be so hard on yourself, it was still fun and creative!

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 2:25
Chapter: Blue Moony

Love bunny, nice!
I'm glad that you continued with the truth or dare and I'm happy with any relationship as long as The Marauders are involved.

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 2:10
Chapter: Dumbledore Dare

Thanks to you, Liveley, I remember how truly awesome Dumbledore is. It think he is hilarious! I enjoyed how he actually double-dared Sirius to go back to bed, nice touch. I also admire your song choice, I Feel Pretty, and having Dumbledore hum the tune for the second verse only increased my respect for the quirky character, whom is gay…awkward (when Sirius sings "I feel pretty and witty and…gaaaaaay…").

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 1:58
Chapter: Diarrhea of the Mouth

I'm not even going to ask why Sirius would ever find the need to send a Howler to himself, although, I must admit, it would be so hilarious I wouldn't be able to get up off the floor. I imagine something along the lines of: 'Sirius Black! How dare you be so awesome! Your looks are incriminatingly illusive and your pranks, legendary…' and so on.

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 1:44
Chapter: Quidditch, Marauder Style

Awww, poor Sirius! I think it was cute how he was flirting with Raven. I must admit, I did not see 'Strip Quiddich' coming at all! But I was correct in that the Marauders got up to more mischief (even though that was highly predictable!). I really liked how Lily finally came into the story, playing Strip Quiddich, of all things! Overall, great chapter.

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 1:30
Chapter: Prongs' Potion

The word scrambler potion was genius! Did you come up with that yourself? If so, I'll have you know that my stomach muscles are killing me and I'm pretty sure that my excessive laughter probably hasn't gone unnoticed. As for the meaning of the next chapter "Quiddich, Marauder Style", I have some idea that it will be very funny and that the boys might get into some mischief! Go Marauders!

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 0:36
Chapter: Midnight Serenade

I'm not sure that I can visualize McGonagall with Black but you really do have a talent for making people laugh, Liveley! I continue to read but find myself pausing several times to wipe the tears of laughter out of my eyes so that I can continue to read and enjoy this wonderful tale about four wonderful characters. P.S. Are Severus and Lily set to make an appearance? I guess I'll just have to read on to find out if this story contains a little ROMANCE!!!

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 0:26
Chapter: Planning Ahead

Good on you, Liveley! We always need more people sticking up for young Peter! I'm sure he was perfectly alright until…
…Anyway, good chapter. I'm not going to leave a massive comment because I'm very eager to read on, and so I will…

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/30/11 0:13
Chapter: Mum's Assignment

Liveley, great job! I am obsessed with The Marauder Era at present and I also like laughing. A lot. Hard. Non-stop. This first chapter fed my desire to read all things Marauder so I will continue on with your story, occasionally leaving a review. Until then, I declare your story,
PerfectInTheEyesOfErised

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