WOW! I am impressed. I'm exausted after READING this, I can't imagine what you felt like writing it! I wish they had higher than a ten. 1000000000000/10!!!!
You knoooow, these last few chapters have seemed a lot like a certain OTHER fic I've read before...
Oh, I like this. I'm going to make it to the end of the story before the day is out! By the way, 'Abel Kane'? Sounds like 'Cain and Abel' to me :)
Hi! I first read your story 8 or 9 months ago, when i was just a guest. I just wanted to let you know that because your story is so phenomenal I printed it out (for when I cant get to the computer), put it in a binder, and read it every so often. Thanks for sticking to it and finishing this story -which many other authors probably wouldn't have- and for keeping it going in Imperius. You're a great writer!!!
One of the greatest fics I've ever read! Hats off to you, Pallas. The ingenuity and intricacy of the back story you created for Remus and his family is unparalled. What REALLY struck me about yout story is that this was published BEFORE HBP, the similarities between Kane and Greyback were truly astonishing! Congratulations on a terrific story!
Ahhh... back again. I keep revisiting this chapter over and over and over and over and over and over and... yeah, I'll shut up now. This, the part with Malfoy when Remus first gets to Hogwarts, and The Werewolf Lesson are my favourite parts. Oh, and BTW, would you HURRY UP AND UPDATE IMPERIUS ON FANFICTION DOT NET ALREADY?????? Please? For your, no, Remus's best fan?
THis is an amazing story. I apologise, I read your story quite a while ago, but never reviewed, and feel i owe you. The resemblance between your plot and part of the plot concerning Fenrir Greyback in HBP is uncanny. Brilliant story, and very well written.
Ooooh, a mystery. Very well written chapter.
This keeps getting more and more complicated. I feel bad for Remus, his father, and his father's family.
Good start, but I want to know everything. I liked the way you showed the memory in Remus's dream.
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!! Don't let Lupin die!!!! He still needs to find out who Kane is and the secrets his dad was keeping from him! So do I!
Oooh, ferals. Not something you'd want to see on a dark night, whether the moon was full or not. I found the lesson as interesting as the students did.
Oh, that comeback Lupin gave to Malfoy's accusations was priceless! And that prank-- I don't have words to describe how funny, touching, and perfect it was.
So Molly changed Remus's diaper, eh? What a subject to bring up at dinner, especially in the presence of Fred and George. And why do I get the feeling that a prank will happen in the near future?
That conversation Remus overheard is very interesting. The part about his mother and father was very touching.
Just reading this gives me the shivers. A feral targeting Harry? This could be bad. Great writing style, though, and good idea behind it.
Ooooh, creepy. I like Remus's philosophy about The Howling. Everyone pretends, they're all just pretending together. Very true.
This story is great. I really enjoyed reading it. The only thing I have against it is Lupin. He was too immature for the Lupin we all know and love. Otherwise, great story!
OMG u r an absolutely fascinating writer! have u ever considered a career as an author! u draw out ur charecters sooo well! Haha!
