Wow. I really loved this story. I think you did a great job. On everything! I don't think I'd have the patience to finish a 4 chapter story, let alone one that ended up 42 chapters long! Congratulations- on finishing it, doing such an awesome job, making it so realistic and believable, and everything else! I thouroughly enjoyed reading every page!
Pallas, Congratulations on your wonderful story. I very much enjoyed it. I found this story when it was on the featured section and immediately got hooked by your striking vision of Remus and your wonderful scenery descriptions. I've always liked Remus, ever since his introduction in PoA, but your story contributed to the fact that Remus is now one of my favorite characters, along with Tonks. I read your story up to chapter 29 in just 2 or 3 days and I honestly thought that was the end of it. Really, I think the ending of that chapter would have been a wonderful, but tragic ending in it's own right. In all honesty, I actually couldn't read on after that and was shocked to see you had updated. Not that I wanted to see Remus dead, but somehow the story was finished. Remus had done what he had come for: Protect the innocent. And Kane was defeated aswell, so basically his struggle was over, as far as I could see. Anyway, I was very curious about the rest of your story, so I decided to keep reading and I was amazed to see how well thought out the second part of your story was. When I realized that the real struggle wasn't over yet, I found it easier to read on and I think that the ending you chose was the only right ending. Your worries about not having potrayed him in the right way are totally unfounded. I think his last battle was perfect and he did the only right thing, thanks to you. Also, you inspired me to write better characters. Not that I have any illusions of being able to create anything worth reading, but at least I'll be having fun doing it :) Once again I congratulate you for writing such a marvelous story. You've kept me and many others reading for months. I'll be checking out your new story soon. Cheers, Dutchy
*Wipes away tears of mirth* oh, that was excellent. I really did laugh so hard i cried.
I just want to say that it is soooooooo cool that Diana's maden name is Winters cause my last name too!!! Dead sirius!!!! I just that I might tell u how cool the last name Winters is cause I ammm amazing!!
Whew! That took a long time! It must have taken you ages! :) :O :P
Oh my gosh...I started with In From the Cold and followed the links here and sat down and read all 42 chapters without stopping. Brilliant. Please keep writing, I love your stuff!
Absolutely fabulous! Although we all know Remus did turn out okay, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time! Excellent, Excellent, Excellent! This is positively one of the best fanfics I've ever read. :)
I can't WAIT for Imperius and In from the Cold to come out. The entire Oblivious story was wonderfully written;you should be awarded a metal or something!
I can't WAIT for Imperius and In from the Cold to come out. The entire Oblivious story was wonderfully written;you should be awarded a metal or something!
Wow... i just can say that, this is... wow... i can belive is over... i had so much fun with it! i love it and there's no more *big kitty eyes [the only puppy i like is Sirius]* simply love the way it ends, it's meorable and a little diferent for what one would expect. You're realy one of my favorites writtes, your new characters areso real, unique, and you can relate them entired to the jk books! i just love them! (well i realy hate Kane but is a good formed character) Hope you'll keep writing.
This is my all-time favorite Remus fic. I've ever read. This was a wonderful story that really followed the stuff from the books really well. This is my favorite fic. I've read on Mugglenet and have been following it since it was posted on the "featured" list several months ago. Props for such an excellent story!!! :D I can not wait for the sequel and any other stories you write. You are an extremely talented writer and should give yourself a HUGE pat on the back (or maybe more like a thump!) for such an awesome story! Thank you so much for this story and journey that we have all gone through with you. Until next time... "OBLIVIOUS!" :D
I have to say that this story is my favorite fan fic that I have read. I look forward to reading your next one! You have truly made Remus and Rey live in my imagination.
Amazing. I love this story- I think it is one of my favorite stories (both fiction and fanfiction) of any that I have ever read. You're a fantastic writer- any books you write I will read. I think the ending fit perfectly into the story- I feel really happy about the ending and Oblivious on a whole. Everything feels complete. You've done a beautiful job and I hope you keep writing!!
That was a fantastic ending to a fantastic fic. I really like your style of writing and you really made me feel for all the characters. I loved how you portrayed Tonks in previous chapters, my sides ached with laughter most of the time. I look forward very much to reading your other fics.
Wow.......that had to be one of the best storiest ive read. If it was a little longer, i think that it could rival a Harry Potter book itself :) Im really gonna miss Remus and Rey, they are such great characters. I am now a huge fan of your fan-fics. I put you in my favorites after the 1st chapter ;) You write the best Remus of all in my opinion. (Exept for jkr of course) Anyway, can't wait for Imperius to come out. Hope to read In from the Cold soon. ;) 100000000000000000000000000000/10
wow...im gonna miss this story...its...perfection...
*wipes away a tear* I'm gonna miss you Pallas. I'm gonna miss rushing to work to see if you've updated. I'm going miss your Remus. I'm going to miss Rey so much. You know how brilliant I think your story is and i very sad to see it go. You now have a fan, i shall wait patiently for you to post in from the cold and I can't wait to read Imperius. Good luck with them
Wow. Thanks for writing such an amazing story. Each character was done so well, and everthing was described brilliantly. 10/10 and I look forward to sequels.
All I can say right now is wow...your imagery thoroughout this entire story has been fantastic, but this last chapter, it was outstanding. Someone mentioned in a review about your writing being poetic, and I whole-heartedly agree. Your desciptions were so beautiful, I had tears in my eyes. I could almost feel the cold. I could feel the pain of your characters. You did an absolutely excellent job with the ending. It left you feeling satsified, something you don't always get. Wonderful job and I can't wait to read more of your work.
Bravo!! This is an excellent story. I anxiously await your future stories.
