wow *gasps* great job! I can't wait until the next chapter.
Another Great Chapter. I think Remus would go through many different emotions. If you had stuck to just one or two, it wouldn't have been near as good. I love that he finally got the better of Kane! You write wonderfully. I look forward to more!
Bravo! Tense, wonderful. You expressed the gamut of emotions felt by Remus brilliantly. I'm feeling bittersweet that this story is about to end. But I'm still begging you: abandon the fanfics and write the Great American Novel already. I'll buy it!
That was soooooooooooo good!! You did a fabulous job with Remus and all his emotions, etc. And you wrote Kane really well too, even though we all hate him with a burning passion!! :D Please finish this fic and then SEQUEL TIME!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give us a sequel!! 1000000000000/10
GO REMUS!!! and go you! Brilliant chapter-you really did succeed in everything you tried to do. I'm sad that this story is going to be finished, but it's been worth it. I just love the way you write, and the way that you characterised Remus. Looking forward to an update!
complety and truly love it! i wanna Remus for my BD *_* it's on 11/16 if you'll like to donate one XD nah just kedding. It's excelent not just the chapter the hol fic. Love the way you put Remus in every way of his life, all the toughs and the little jokes that makes him a marauders and we don't even notice. Love the bad guy, well i realy hate Kane, and when you describe how Lupin feels y fell for it but eve so i want Kane to be dead ¬¬ even when the character is so well worked and all, he's just so... he get in my nerves like the rat (peter) and all y want is to give them what they deserve ¬¬ hope you keep writting, not just this one but others, i realy like the way you writte and your work with the characters. I'll wait for the next chap^^' sorry for the lausy english, i'm getting better but sometimes i'm ashame to give reviews *^^* hope you get the idea =)
Very well done. I think you've written Lupin quite well...it seems to me that his emotions throughout this chapter are bang on. You've done an amazing job with this story, and I have throughly enjoyed it. Outstanding job.
Great chapter!!!! Once again you have done it again! I love the way Remus acted. You write characters emotions great! I'm so glad you are writing a sequel! With this story ending i would have nothing to look forward to after a long week. Can't wait for the next chapter. 100000000000000000000/10!!!!! ;-)
Oh, my HEAVENS!!!! That was the most amazing chapter EEEEEEEEEVEEEEERRR!!!! The cocktail that was Remus was perfect and delicious. Seriously, just PERFECT and DELICIOUS. That was gorgeously done, and I salute you. Kudos! You're awesome!!!
that was absolutely AMAZING! you couldn't have written it any better. remus's reactions were completely believable....i just loved the whole thing. i can't wait for the sequel!!!
I have been following this story with about as much anticipation as I have when awaiting a new Harry Potter book...however, I have yet to review. Since this is by far my favourite chapter, it seemed appropriate to, finally put my two cents in, which is why my review is so long-winded. It is 41 chapters of admiration getting purged. It seems as though your little fic here could be something JKR thought up herself. I would tip my hat to you, however, I wear a beanie with little cat ears on it, and that is rather difficult to tip. Metaphorically, however... eh, whatever. Great fic, amazing. The very best I have ever read, and since reading "A Lily Story", that is saying quite alot. It's refreshing to see a world devoid of plot holes and spelling errors.... and I thank you with all my heart for knowing how to use freakin' commas. 100000000/10... PLEASE keep writing. You owe it to the world of fanfiction, and bored teenagers like myself.
I have been reading this fic for quite a while but I haven't review. This is the perfect charter to submit one so here it goes: Amazing, brilliant, wonderful, superb, I could go on listing a bunch of words that describe your fic. The story line, for one, is the best and most believable I have seen in a VERY long time. I also love how persuasive you writing is, it is so easy to believe everything Kane says and a few lines later understand Remus’ point. I adore your story(and your writting style) and am disappointed that it is drawing to a close. -Rae
That was brilliant! The dialogue was just perfect. I loved watching Remus settle everything in his mind and gain true closure. It was better than I had imagined. You captured Remus beautifully - his dialogue was dead on. Thanks so much for putting so much thought and talent into this story. I have enjoyed it very much and I'm a little sorry to see it end with the next chapter. Well done and thank you!!!!
Go Remus! Go Remus! Go Remus! Woah! You wrote Remus really well it was exactly how I'd imagine he'd act. Their conversation was really realistic and both their emotions were described really well. I really do feel sorry for Kane as much as I hate him. The end was also spot on I loved Remus leaving as he did on the upper hand. You are an absolutely amazing writer! :-D
wow, did you ever suceed. this was, i think, my favourite chapter to date. you made remus exactly what he should have been in that situation. calm, doubtful, angry. everything he should have been. he went through his emotions perfectly, being in control and out. letting kane's words get to him, then brushing them off. and he came out of it all with the upper hand, which as you said, was his strngth. he won, not in physical battle, but in the battle of emotions. very well done, it was all i could have ever hoped for in this chapter.
Succeed! My god did you succeed. 10/10. I think that this chapter is brilliant. I think that you got the cocktail of emotions perfectly balanced. You couldn't have done better and although I don't want this story to end I really want to read the final chapter. On another note i'm sure that you mentioned something about in the draft Tonks and Remus getting together. I think that even though you have more or less wiped that out of the story, the hint are still erm anvill sized. Anyway my verdict for this chapter is 10/10
Perfect. Really encapsulated what the whole story has been leading up to. I thought you captured Remus perfectly, the precise strength he has that Kane has never had and you've given him, and us, the closure he was looking for. Really enjoyed this chapter.
I love this story. I can't wait for the last chapter. Um...i started reading it before HBP, and when the book came out I congratulated you in my head for hitting the mark remarkably well. I love your Remus Lupin, and I think you've hit the emotions really well. i mean who could walk into a situation like that and feel only one emotion?
This chapter was brilliantly written. I take my hat off to you, or I would if I had a hat :) (no spiders here). You managed to find the perfect balance for Remus's emotions and the dialog is the most intense and the most definitive so far in this story. I assume the next chapter will not take so long to come?
Wow... I really don't know what to say. EXCELLENT. I really admire your work, your a superb writter. You have just the greatest way of displaying emotions and making them go all the way to the reader. Lupin was just so... Lupin, it was exactly like him to try and find a clouser and a victory too, but in his terms, not Kane's. Kane. He is just such a wonderful character, not that I really 'like' him but it has such deph, such an excellent mixture of emotions... no matter his best efforts he feels human to us readers. A wonderful piece of work... really, I wish I could write as well as you do. You did a great work with the emotions of Remus and Kane. A perfect balance. Thanks for this wonderful fic and I will waiting for the last chapter and the sequel. 10/10