Think we're about to get answers to a lot of questions. Not sure we're going to like all the answers, or even all the questions, but it should be interesting.
Enjoying the story.
Excellent. Very intense. I do believe Remus just, met his maker so to speak. Kane had to be the one who bit him at 3. This is getting very interesting.
Good chapter. Very interesting.
Forgot to ask about this in my first comment.Charlie left school the year before Harry and Ron started. Doesn't that mean he's only three or four years older than Percy and eight or nine years older than Harry and Ron.
Like it. Fun to read.
Definitely makes me want to keep reading. Nice story.
Very intriguiging plot/storyline. Like the characters.
Interesting beginning. Like the premise so far.
I may have already mentioned this but I love the way you use the title to forshadow.
I LOVE the psychological and emotional battle. The contrasts between Kane's strong body and weak mind and Remus's strong mind and weak body is very ironic. Brilliantly written, I love it.
did I mention that I like your chapter names too? I know it seems like a small thing, but a lot of fanfiction authors can't seem to come up with something simultaneously creative and relevant.
I love the way the title ties into everything, both in random descriptive words and in the actual plot. Good work. I love this story, its my second time reading it through.
I just finished reading this. It was amazing! You are a very gifted writer
Just finished reading this for the 3rd time, stil as good as the first time, and I'm still noticing things I didn't notice the first time roud!
I've just started reading this for the 3rd time, it never gets boring!
seriously, this is like the best fanfic that i've ever read! it was brilliant! it feels like it's something that i could just read all over again! i loved it! :D
I really, really like this. excellent.
yeah, this is an evil cliffie.
Danae Trebond---!!!!! nice one..