oh man, i feel so sorry for lupin. idiot.
the length of your chapters is not a bad thing--it simply gives you enough room to fully develop your characters.
the way you write lupin and tonks, I just don't think it is right for them to end up together. I usually like that pairing, but in this story it just doesn't seem appropriate.
I really like the way you write lupin's voice. it seems very true to his character. I just read a fic where lupin sounded like an american teenage girl....you put just the right amount of sensitivity and wisdom and humor and sadness into him.
wow i love this :) gnna keep reading
Oooooh, that was interesting. Well written.
I love this chapter sooooooo much. I'm always coming back to read it. Very well written. As good as JKR.
You're right, ignorance is bliss, there are some thing that I know but wish I didn't.
I must confess I read most of this story in one go a few weeks ago and couldn't think of a good enough review to write. This fic is absolutely wonderful, and I'd say the best take on Remus' life I've ever read. Of course the writing was wonderful, the descriptions touching and the feelings of characters realistic. Everything from hilarious to horribly sad, this fic covered it all. The way all the pieces and hidden clues fit together was JKR worthy and I especially enjoyed the Abel/Kane transition, which you pulled off wonderfully, giving the read just the right mix of a little pity and a lot of resentment and hatred for the twisted werewolf. Your "feral" idea is brilliant by the way. And so is a lot more, it really can't be expressed in a single review, so I'm not going to try any longer. Instead, I think I'll go read the sequel! :D
:D Go you for figuring the ages like that! I've always hated when "chat" things go AGAINST canon!
Anyway... I'm really enjoying this chapter! It's fairly angsty, of course, but with some light bits - perfect combination! And I love your characterization of Remus! I can't wait to see what he's planned!
Oh, thank God! I read about half of this story and thought it was beyond fantastic and then I came off the computer for a while and FORGOT WHERE IT WAS. I could remember the plot details and everything, but could I remember the title?
No.
But YAY! I am going to go refresh my memory and carry on with the story. Thank you so much - I adore it!
I hate this chapter. I actually made me cry. Good job!
I enoyed this chapter. I loved the beginning, with Remus's dream about when he was bitten was briliant and very interesting. I really want to learn more about it.
I got a kick out of this line: Ah, Draco Malfoy. Subtle as a Hungarian Horntail and with almost as much charm. The fireworks, a tribue to Sirius and James, was very touching.
I loved this chapter. Kane is so evil. It sent chills down my spine reading about Kane taunting Remus about wanting to a feral. I love your characterization of Kane. He is the complete opposite of Remus. Remus is like the good werewolf, while you have Kane who is the perfect example of evil.
This is probably my favorite chapter in the entire story. It was very interesting reading about things related to werewolves. I loved the stuff about feral werewolves, and the thing about silver killing a werewolf. It was so interesting to hear all of this.
