Even though I am reading this fic YEARS after you wrote it I still think that (if you're checking the story) you might want some feedback. As weird as this sounds, my favourite part of the fic is the section with Cole as I feel that your writing had progressed so much from the beginning of the story and the character development was great. My least favourite part of the fic is how much you have going on for Lily and James - how many horrible situations they end up in, how many times they break up, etc. I appreciate that these were dark times, but they deserve a little time to be happy :) That said, I really love this fic so please don't take my comment the wrong way! I'll definitely be checking out the sequel.
A little too easy, too quick. I feel like if you waited another month or two with them talking more it would be better. They just became friends and now pretty quick they are more. So more time would of been good.
its a nice story,really.but you might want to extend chapter length...most of them are a bit short.and wizards use knuts,sickles and galleons for money,not pennies
wonderful schems and ideas!
that was the most stupid thing sirius would have ever done. however, he might have.
Kill them both! u r terrible! (not really)
im just mad at the fact that katy might die!
what the heck is going to happen to poor Halle, Sirius is bachelor
please check grammar and use commas!
Loved this chapter
I've read this story before and I love it. I like katy a lot.
Stops and starts a little bit, still interesting though.
Lots of love to you for this story.
I'm pretty disappointed. I expected this to be really good, and so far, it's not well-written at all.
yes! finally someone does something smart lol. thank you for having a character show how useful the marauder's map can really be!
Hey, I just got an account, and the first thing I did was come to review this! It's my favorite story that I've read on here, and I had to tell you :D
yes, VERY fluffy!
o gooodness! why can't real men be like that! that is pure romance!
haha! i love Sirius!
best fanfic EVER!!
awww! that is true love!
I really like this chapter too.