Reviewer: OohButterfly
Date: 04/21/11 16:44
Chapter: Past Mistakes

I liked the flashback a lot and how Ginny is such a strong character. I KNEW IT!! I KNEW IT WAS DRACO!!

Reviewer: LilyRosePotter
Date: 08/18/09 15:14
Chapter: The Princess's Tales

WOW... what a cliffhanger... i love this story

Reviewer: hope47
Date: 05/02/09 12:50
Chapter: The Princess's Tales


Author's Response: Hey... You probably haven't seen it, but I've written on my profile a couple of weeks ago that I won't update on this site anymore, after the last chapter had been rejected by the mods a couple of times for various reasons (some of which I can't understand). Seeing as this hasn't been the first time this has happened, I decided that I no longer will post my story on this site. BUT DON'T WORRY! Mugglenet fanfiction isn't the only site, where I've posted this story. Another site is and the URL to my story there is As they don't have to go through mods there, you'll also find a few more chapters over there than are posted here. I hope to see you and also other readers of my story on this site, over at! Chibi

Reviewer: gryffindor_chica13
Date: 02/21/09 21:44
Chapter: The Princess's Tales

I love this so far! Can't wait to see what happens... good work!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/08/09 22:37
Chapter: The Princess's Tales

Oooo, Great chapter!!! Wonder whats going to happen now that Voldemort knows.... Please update soon :-)

Reviewer: devious1
Date: 02/08/09 2:43
Chapter: The Princess's Tales

love the story so far..keep it coming

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 17:08
Chapter: The Princess's Tales

Oh S...!!!!! I was afraid this would happen, but hoping it wouldn't. Now I'm going to be REALLY impatient for your next chapters.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 16:34
Chapter: Hogwart's Seven

Love this one too!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 15:50
Chapter: Ron's big Day

Awesome does not even cover this chapter. Brilliant is a little closer but not good enough. I'm not sure there is a word that could describe how well this is written. Maybe incredible?

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 15:24
Chapter: The Spy's Decision

I love the way you are developing this story. It's a really great prospective on the first war. I'm also guessing Snape is still the eavesdropper in this timeline and he and Lily were childhood friends before Hogwarts. I like the Snape in your story. I was always sure in the HP series that he would turn out to be a good guy and, of course, was proven right in DH.
Do you have this story on any other sites with more chapters? Patience is a virtue, however, not one I have much of and would llove to read more sooner.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 14:40
Chapter: Answers

That was pretty low, using a 13 yr old. 'Course Voldy doesn't hesitate to try and kill a 15 month old so don't know why I'm surprised. I don't even want to know what Molly and Arthur will do if they find out. I'm surprised Ron didn't try to kill Snape right then for using his "cousin" like that. I'm guessing the Snape family will now be residing at Hogwart's. Maybe they will be able to get rid of Voldy in this timeline.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 13:49
Chapter: The new Potions Master

Wen I wrote the previous review I forgot to ask one very important question. Was it Peter using Polyjuice Potion to be Remus at the Weasley's so he could poison Harry? Or is Remus the bad guy in this timeline.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 3:19
Chapter: Harry's Scheme

Spinner's End? Little Hangleton, the Gaunt cottage? Harry is obviously going to try and rescue Snape's wife and kids. The poison certainly sounds like a Snape concoction and he'll only reverse it if his family is safe.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 2:50
Chapter: The new Potions Master

So it wasn't the twins. How did Snape or Wormtail get something in Harry's eggnog? Because it was definitely Harry that Voldy wants out of the way.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 2:30
Chapter: Turning Points

What did the twins put in Harry's drink?

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 1:53
Chapter: The Moment of Truth

With any luck in this timeline there will be a happier life for the Potter's and the good Marauder's. But we still have to find out what will happen to their own timeline. Read on I say!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 1:16
Chapter: The Truth in Rumours

2nd chance? I wrote a review but don't know if it went through. My computer just did something weird. I'm glad Ron is starting to grow up, but what's going to happen when they get back to their own time? I've read stories where the travelers remember, and where they only knew they had been somewhere but not what happened. Is it a different timeline? Will they be able to tell James & Lily about the Profecy? Will it change their future? What about Hermione & Draco? It's going to be interesting to find out. And will they go back to the second they left if they go back at a different time of year?

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 0:48
Chapter: Norton Lewthwaite

Well changes in a parallel timeline would make at least one reality better. If they are on the same timeline, then they've already irreversibly changed some things and will remember them when they get back. It can be very confusing. I've read enough books that have dealt with timetravel to realize - You can never be sure.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 0:23
Chapter: Past Mistakes

I was right! I sort of had doubts a couple times, but he was the only one I could think of. This is not going to make Ron happy at all. If this timeline alters their timeline - I don't even want to go there.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/04/09 23:58
Chapter: Dinner with the Potters

Another good chapter. I'm glad Remus had the good sense to tell them he knew about Harry. Wolves do have extraordinary senses. I'm also betting James is going to ask Albus about why and how Harry was attacked. It would be nice to be able to change things for the better, but it could also change other things for the worse.

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