Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/22/12 4:28
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

I loved how this was all a conversation!!!!!! What an ingenious idea! Sort of like Hemingway in that manner, but better. Maybe you will succeed in making me a Hermione/Snape shipper...

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/29/07 13:08
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

I thought this was hilarious! I loved how Hermione kept outsmarting Snape with every retort. I was a bit dubeous when I saw it would all be dialogue, I'd never read anything like that before, but in some ways I enjoyed it more than I would if it was full of cold glares, confident smiles and thoughtful pauses. ELNT

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 08/14/07 8:50
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

Well, Hermine definately got a bit snippier after leaving school. The story was awesome, keep it up!

Reviewer: EAConwell
Date: 08/06/07 17:22
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

*snickers* aww poor snape, tormented by hermione

Reviewer: lilyjones
Date: 05/10/07 2:28
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

interesting0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

Reviewer: Rowena_Lewis
Date: 05/06/07 17:05
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

(laughs) I love it. :D Just like alll the rest of them.

Reviewer: Koukkujalka
Date: 02/17/07 13:34
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

great dialog!!!

Reviewer: ViolentIvyLeaguegrrl
Date: 10/28/06 17:43
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

Wow. That was amazing. The dialogue was very snappy and the characters spot-on. Very quick-paced, no times that dragged. Great word choice and very good insults/comebacks. I bloody loved it. GREAT job.

Reviewer: Karamel_Kisses
Date: 08/20/06 14:43
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

i nrmally cringe durring stories of this type.... but you've done any amazing job!!! Karamel kisses for u
-lady K

Reviewer: Karamel_Kisses
Date: 08/20/06 14:42
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

i nrmally cringe durring stories of this type.... but you've done any amazing job!!! Karamel kisses for u
-lady K

Reviewer: RedheadedWeasley
Date: 05/27/06 11:27
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

Good job. I was a little worried I wouldn't be able to follow it all with who said what, but you did a good job on really getting into the characters and expressing them without having to show the reader their thoughts. The last few lines made me laugh. Good job.

Reviewer: RedheadedWeasley
Date: 05/27/06 10:35
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

Good job. I was a little worried I wouldn't be able to follow it all with who said what, but you did a good job on really getting into the characters and expressing them without having to show the reader their thoughts. The last few lines made me laugh. Good job.

Reviewer: MagicAlly
Date: 09/01/05 4:44
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

This together with "Painfully Obvious" had me smiling from start to finish. Great format, great banter, hope you do some more. Thanks.

Reviewer: MollysSister
Date: 08/23/05 15:52
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

tee hee I enjoy HG having the upper hand in your short story. The banter was lively and fun. thank you

Reviewer: Masked One
Date: 03/05/05 23:27
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

I really liked this. You had a good balance in there--humor and some seriousness, with undertones of romance. On top of that, you threw in just enough clues about what was happening to set the readerís imagination going, but left a lot of freedom to fill in the blanks. They both seemed IC was well--props to you for the story.

Reviewer: darkness_falls
Date: 01/28/05 8:54
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

Really good Mary!! Brilliant title.

Reviewer: fjones
Date: 12/31/04 0:16
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

it was good for dialog only, and in general

Reviewer: meandmysharpie
Date: 12/19/04 20:18
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

awesome, they already go back and forth like an old married couple

Reviewer: MoxieLovegood
Date: 11/26/04 19:42
Chapter: A Simple Suggestion

hehehe... I love the banter! Very interesting format.

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