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Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 06/22/12 4:28 · For: A Simple Suggestion
I loved how this was all a conversation!!!!!! What an ingenious idea! Sort of like Hemingway in that manner, but better. Maybe you will succeed in making me a Hermione/Snape shipper...


Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 11/29/07 13:08 · For: A Simple Suggestion
I thought this was hilarious! I loved how Hermione kept outsmarting Snape with every retort. I was a bit dubeous when I saw it would all be dialogue, I'd never read anything like that before, but in some ways I enjoyed it more than I would if it was full of cold glares, confident smiles and thoughtful pauses. ELNT


Name: DracosBaby_232 (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 8:50 · For: A Simple Suggestion
Well, Hermine definately got a bit snippier after leaving school. The story was awesome, keep it up!


Name: EAConwell (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 17:22 · For: A Simple Suggestion
*snickers* aww poor snape, tormented by hermione


Name: lilyjones (Anonymous) · Date: 05/10/07 2:28 · For: A Simple Suggestion
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Name: Rowena_Lewis (Signed) · Date: 05/06/07 17:05 · For: A Simple Suggestion
(laughs) I love it. :D Just like alll the rest of them.


Name: Koukkujalka (Signed) · Date: 02/17/07 13:34 · For: A Simple Suggestion
great dialog!!!


Name: ViolentIvyLeaguegrrl (Signed) · Date: 10/28/06 17:43 · For: A Simple Suggestion
Wow. That was amazing. The dialogue was very snappy and the characters spot-on. Very quick-paced, no times that dragged. Great word choice and very good insults/comebacks. I bloody loved it. GREAT job.


Name: Karamel_Kisses (Signed) · Date: 08/20/06 14:43 · For: A Simple Suggestion
i nrmally cringe durring stories of this type.... but you've done any amazing job!!! Karamel kisses for u
-lady K


Name: Karamel_Kisses (Signed) · Date: 08/20/06 14:42 · For: A Simple Suggestion
i nrmally cringe durring stories of this type.... but you've done any amazing job!!! Karamel kisses for u
-lady K


Name: RedheadedWeasley (Signed) · Date: 05/27/06 11:27 · For: A Simple Suggestion
Good job. I was a little worried I wouldn't be able to follow it all with who said what, but you did a good job on really getting into the characters and expressing them without having to show the reader their thoughts. The last few lines made me laugh. Good job.


Name: RedheadedWeasley (Signed) · Date: 05/27/06 10:35 · For: A Simple Suggestion
Good job. I was a little worried I wouldn't be able to follow it all with who said what, but you did a good job on really getting into the characters and expressing them without having to show the reader their thoughts. The last few lines made me laugh. Good job.


Name: MagicAlly (Signed) · Date: 09/01/05 4:44 · For: A Simple Suggestion
This together with "Painfully Obvious" had me smiling from start to finish. Great format, great banter, hope you do some more. Thanks.


Name: MollysSister (Signed) · Date: 08/23/05 15:52 · For: A Simple Suggestion
tee hee I enjoy HG having the upper hand in your short story. The banter was lively and fun. thank you


Name: Masked One (Signed) · Date: 03/05/05 23:27 · For: A Simple Suggestion
I really liked this. You had a good balance in there--humor and some seriousness, with undertones of romance. On top of that, you threw in just enough clues about what was happening to set the readerís imagination going, but left a lot of freedom to fill in the blanks. They both seemed IC was well--props to you for the story.


Name: darkness_falls (Signed) · Date: 01/28/05 8:54 · For: A Simple Suggestion
Really good Mary!! Brilliant title.


Name: fjones (Signed) · Date: 12/31/04 0:16 · For: A Simple Suggestion
it was good for dialog only, and in general


Name: meandmysharpie (Signed) · Date: 12/19/04 20:18 · For: A Simple Suggestion
awesome, they already go back and forth like an old married couple


Name: MoxieLovegood (Signed) · Date: 11/26/04 19:42 · For: A Simple Suggestion
hehehe... I love the banter! Very interesting format.


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