Reviewer: Victoire
Date: 07/29/08 0:28
Chapter: one-shot

you.are.amamazing.....

Reviewer: sesiliah
Date: 02/28/06 22:48
Chapter: one-shot

You are officially my idol! I almost cried, and writing never makes me cry. I love how you write about my favourite characters! (The Masquerade Cliche, I love that!) You have Sirius right down to how he looks at Lily; it is incredible! Amazingly written! 10!!

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever
Date: 01/31/06 20:57
Chapter: one-shot

That was amazing! What I really liked about this story was the way you described Sirius. That seems like the way he would act. I also loved the way your story wasn't overly dramatic... it was just right. Please write more... I mean more stories not more to this... And please update Canis Majoris!! =P Anyway, awesome fic. 10/10

Reviewer: snufflesismyidol
Date: 11/06/05 11:27
Chapter: one-shot

I really liked how you began and ended with the "black, sirius black" bit. Good job! 10/10

Reviewer: snufflesismyidol
Date: 11/06/05 11:27
Chapter: one-shot

I really liked how you began and ended with the "black, sirius black" bit. Good job! 10/10

Reviewer: Dory_the_Fishie
Date: 11/06/05 9:35
Chapter: one-shot

That was amazing. You really captured Sirius, I think. Some things in particular I liked:

"Perhaps she wasn't heartbroken. I don't believe she had a heart." Perfet. Exactly what I think her character was like.

"I laughed. But I had reason to laugh then. I had the Marauders. And I had James." Again, perfect.

I lived my whole life trying to disassociate myself from them, and then, when it mattered most, I acted exactly like them." So sad. But it's what Sirius would think of himself.

"Of course hindsight is 20/20..." So true...

"It would be difficult to believe of me...except I'm a Black." This explained perfectly how much Sirius despised his name.

I also liked the beginning and ending. You've done a wonderful with this! And I think now my review is quite long enough... :)

Reviewer: peachesandcream
Date: 08/29/05 16:54
Chapter: one-shot

That was really good. It really gave insight to what Sirius would have gone through while in prison. I liked the discriptions of all of his friends. They were really good

Reviewer: JFig
Date: 08/29/05 8:56
Chapter: one-shot

Wow, that was really sad, how he kept thinking of everyone, his best friends, his godson, blaming himself for all that's happened...I like the way it ended, too. It sounds...well, frankly, it sounds a bit crazy. That was really great!! 10~ *JFig*

Reviewer: evil_fairy
Date: 08/28/05 9:40
Chapter: one-shot

I liked it. It gave me a clearer view of how much torture Sirius went through when he was sent to Azkaban!! It was really good. Wow first reviewer yay!!!!

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