Reviews For All Right, Evans?
Reviewer: Dracoisbeast
Date: 09/01/12 23:44
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

The story was pretty good for a first-time fan fic. The last chapter needed work. What happened to Bellatrix? How did McGonagall find the three of them if they were in an enclosed room? It left me questioning the whole of the story, which is not want a reader wants. And the setting wasn't really a good setting for the end of a story. Or a kiss. Choose something more romantic and cozy for the end. I hope for more lengthly chapters next time. I do hope you write more James/Loly fan fics in the future!

Reviewer: Dracoisbeast
Date: 09/01/12 21:35
Chapter: A New Beginning

Is this really your first fan fic? It's off to a great start. I love your style of writing.

Reviewer: redhead101
Date: 09/17/11 18:06
Chapter: The First of September

this is a really cool book

Reviewer: balla
Date: 12/27/10 22:33
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

Great story! loved it.

Reviewer: AReader
Date: 10/04/10 19:18
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

You know, this dosen't make much sense. How could Bellatrix still be at Hogwarts if she's at least five years older than them? Andyou use the words 'and everthing went black' a lot...

Reviewer: twilightfan101
Date: 07/25/09 16:18
Chapter: Black

he better not of died

Reviewer: Tigger_tiger987
Date: 11/12/08 13:23
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

Briliant. Absoulutly brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: maryweasly
Date: 07/18/08 12:26
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

I love it! i'm gonna post it on my favorites. you should write more often.

Reviewer: lilyrox
Date: 06/23/08 16:07
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

Oh my god!! That was so good. You've got me on the edge of my seat now. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/16/08 18:13
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

great job! good luck w/ whatever's going on in your life now (i did read your bio to see about this chapter) and this is a great story. i loved the ending. {Becca}

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 03/01/08 12:55
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

lol great story though... erm arent you gonna continue it??

Reviewer: typicalgurl1
Date: 02/14/08 21:07
Chapter: The First of September

OH MY GOSH! THIS IS SO GOOD!!!! PLS WRITE MANY MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!! I LUV THIS FAN FIC!!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!

Reviewer: Marvalo Gaunt
Date: 01/19/08 17:29
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

aww happy ending loved this story well written bravo!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 01/14/08 15:54
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

OH MY GOD BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!!!! I love how you added in almost every other chapter All Right evans!!! Awesome awesome! Why aren;t you writing anymore , oh wait let me read your bio!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 01/11/08 14:17
Chapter: Cheers

Oh, I think I love James Potter, not because of all the Quidditch and Head Boy status, he's just got such a magnetic personality. I'm loving this fic, the Marauder era is one of my favourites. This fic has made me laugh, get angry at Aaron for cheating, and even feel sorry for James when he won the match but not Lily. Great stuff!

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 01/05/08 4:56
Chapter: Defeat Over Victory

oh what a cheery chapter!!!!! kidding!!

i LOVED it! it was FABUOULS!!!!

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 01/04/08 15:47
Chapter: The First of September

i love this story!!!!!!

james dosent seem much of a trouble maker in this story!! i like it. no i dont like it i love it!!!

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 01/01/08 23:06
Chapter: Lily and James's First Chapter

You wrote: Jamesís lifeless hand.
But he wasn't dead...maybe you should say limp or something?
I really like this fic; for the most part it's true to how I think of the characters.

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 01/01/08 18:31
Chapter: Cheers

eugh...Lily wouldn't drink illegally! And honestly, I don't think James would either. I really like the story so far, but this chapter bugged me.

Reviewer: erubin18
Date: 12/20/07 10:50
Chapter: A New Beginning

loveee it! i love the marauders they are so cool, and in the real HP books i love the flashbacks to them! so far, your first fan fic is great :)

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