Reviews For Lily
Reviewer: Theloonyhermione
Date: 07/16/12 14:16
Chapter: Frizzy Hair

This was good! I don't mind that it's short. One sentence I think you should look over, near the end, 'I don't want her to see the part about me being envious of her cool earlier.' I think you might be missing a word or something, because it just doesn't sound right. Good job again!

Reviewer: SaboteurVictory
Date: 07/19/11 15:44
Chapter: If Slughorn Were My Grandfather

The Lily in this chapter reminds me so much of a friend of mine. Last year, when my friend turned eighteen, she made an oath not to interact with boys of any kind. She told her co-worker that she had a phobia of consuming dairy products in the sunlight to avoid sharing a milkshake with him. Haha, I'm thoroughly enjoying your version of Lily!

Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 06/03/11 13:28
Chapter: Grinning Prats


Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/30/11 10:58
Chapter: Goodbye Cruel World


Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/30/11 10:51
Chapter: James and Jules

I LOVE!! Leet's leave it at that

Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/30/11 10:43
Chapter: Curiosity About The Cat

OK I, once again LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/30/11 10:35
Chapter: Hall Brawl '74

I once again LOVE. Umm.... but I'd like to say at this point Lily and Severus were still friends.

Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/25/11 13:32
Chapter: Ugly Duckling

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/25/11 13:25
Chapter: Hatred

Okay, so I think it unlikely that Holly would call Madame Pomfrey Poppy. Other than that it's great!

Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/25/11 13:20
Chapter: Frizzy Hair

This seems so real that I feel she's sitting right next to me. I LOVE! ! !! ! !

Reviewer: isadora duncan
Date: 05/25/11 13:12
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

I think it's really good. I LOVE it!! Going off to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/08/11 15:26
Chapter: Frizzy Hair

Was it a high-heeled shoe?

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/08/11 15:23
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

I love this story, but I really think you should keep writing Nuttier than a Fruitcake.

Reviewer: Moony1998
Date: 10/16/10 0:58
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

hahah this is a good Story :D i really love how its
a diary :D :D Keeeeep writing ;)

Reviewer: The Maraudette
Date: 04/01/10 16:01
Chapter: Welcome To My Life

I really liked this first chapter! It introduced Lily perfectly, telling us everything we needed to know without rambling on. I think you've portrayed her very realistically and it would make J.K. Rowling proud. I'll definitely be reading the rest of the story and can't wait to see what Lily writes about. Well done on writing such a good first chapter, this story definitely has potential! :D

~The Maraudette :P

Reviewer: twilightfan101
Date: 08/10/09 13:49
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

that was the worst story ive read on this site they didnt even kiss she still hates him

Reviewer: scribbler125
Date: 04/19/09 3:14
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous

I have to say I really enjoyed this fanfic. I read it all in one sitting and was laughing the entire time. Thanks for a great laugh and an even better read. I've also read what you have so far in "Nuttier Than A Fruitcake" and I like it. My only complaint is that it isn't finished yet! Please continue with it as soon as possible...
Oh, and before I leave you, I also really enjoyed "Lily and James: Their Story of Love" Good work!!! :)

Reviewer: ray_16
Date: 03/06/09 5:49
Chapter: Curiosity About The Cat

Did you know Sirius has a star named after him?

I did a double take on this one. Ha! I thought it was the other way around! Haha!

Reviewer: meldina
Date: 02/18/09 16:27
Chapter: Midnight Rendezvous


Reviewer: Angela_Prongs
Date: 01/25/09 20:51
Chapter: Ugly Duckling

Aw, you're so hard on yourself! The story has been absolutely *excellent* so far, and not slow or boring at all! I'm actually re-reading all the fics in my favorites, so that oughta tell you something. ;) *hugs* I really love the teenage-girl problems you keep putting in here. It makes me smile, knowing exactly how Lily feels. You know, I found a gray hair the other day? Eek!!

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