Ahh, that was so sad and so beautiful. It feels like it should be canon. I love this line: "she fell hard and fast for a pretty boy who had a dead cousin. " I love that they fell in love talking about thistles and daffodils and voices in the wind. It was really gorgeous. I could almost feel the sunshine of their walks.

I love this story. This is incredibly original and is a pairing I hadn't considered before, but you have made this believable. The mythical elements that you haven woven into a romance are just perfect. It is difficult to pick a favourite part, because it is all well-written and just heartrending. However this line speaks volumes about your characterisation of Hermione in a way I hadn't perceived her before.
Hermione lost her Lover to the War, and now there's hell to pay.

This story was recommended for reading on audiofics, and I'm glad I chanced upon it, and then read it. It's been a joy to record and I've saved the story because everytime I read or listen, I cry. Amazing take on a rare-pair and an odd girl. Carole xxx

I love the way this story is told - the wandering style that fits their walks, slightly surreal like their stolen minutes. I like the innocence of the whole story, and the oddness of the two of them, and how they become friends because of it. It’s a very soothing story.

This was beautifully written and it seemed truly heart-felt. When you added Cedric into the mix that's when I realized how terrible and frightening the tournament must have been for her.

" It was just as natural as dead cousins who talked through the wind, sunlight flowing like magic, and the freak girl being friends with the popular boy."

I just loved that description.

It's interesting the way you weave this tale of tragedy. I've always thought this style of writing rather messy though. However, the emotions do not hit as hard as they should have done.

Keep improving, babe.

This is quite possibly the best story I've ever read. First, you opened my eyes the possibility of Hermione and Cedric. Next, you chose to write in the faery tale style, which has been my favourite for many years. Last, you added stuff from mythology and it was just so beautiful! This is definitely going in my favourites section. Keep writing, because it would be a shame for you to go to waste, now wouldn't it?

awww dats sad but cute nice job !! heehee i like revewing its fun lol. well really good story!

Wow. That's really beautiful. It's a little OOC, but in a convincing way. It's very sweet, certainly realistic. I love it.

Oh my oh my. this is just what I have wanted to read. this is wonderful, this is so new. I'd love there was more of this on here... If only...

As a devoted fan of both Hermione and Cedric, I adore this fic. This type of storytelling is fresh and new to me, and while the bolding and italicizing was confusing at first, I finally read it out loud and it all made sense. I had never though of Hermione/Cedric as a pairing, and the way you wrote them together seemed so natural and in-character (for as much as we know about Cedric). A fic like this - written with such straight-forward clarity while maintaining intruige - is a rare find. Thank you for giving me a new favorite, as well as a new pairing to love!