It's just sunk in... you've managed to kill the older Dursleys... again. Well congratulations on restraining from killing them just for the fun of it in some randomly irrelevant place. At least now we can bug you for the sequel.
Finally finished it, and although I have to say I prefered PoE and CotD, it was still amazing! If you write a story about Dudley becoming the new Dark Lord, it would be the fan fiction of the century, please do!!!!
Very good, and I'm so pleased you havn't killed off another Weasley. However, you've forgotten the e in Surry near the end of the chapter. ;)
You've made me cry... again. Typically, it's for exactly the same reason as COTD, I have a soft spot for reunions between Harry, Sirius and his parents. I think I prefered Voldemort's defeat in COTD, but obviously you have less of a free reign here as there's another book to comply with, and it's still amazing!
I suppose having read Powers of Emotion and Curse of the Damned, I shouldn't hope for Dudley to decide to overcome his hatred and take his place in the wizarding world... anyway, the first chapter has already hooked me and I look forward to seeing how Harry kills Voldemort this time.
i must say thats some impressive similarities to the actual book! i love the dudley parts!
the only thing i have a problem with, is how could shannon get to 12 grimmauld place?
other than that, its awesome!
very good and very lengthy ive heard a lot about u and this story looked like the most intresting so i decided to try it. its very good so far because u have a nice balance between the romance and the action in this chapter. nice job!
DONT YOU DARE MAKE THIS DUDLEY/GINNY JUST BECAUSE HE'S A WIZARD!!
absolutely amazing...Fantastic Job!! you're an amazing writter, i think this might be my new favorite Fan Fiction Story!!
wow!!! Fantastic job!!
Awww...a happy little Christmas :D