Reviewer: Pottergirl6
Date: 12/14/07 16:59
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

This was very clever. It fits perfectly with J.K. Rowling's story about when Myrtle was killed. I think that you did a good job with it.

Author's Response: thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Ebony14
Date: 08/09/07 1:44
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

Oh...one more thing. i've read a lot of fics on MNFF, and yours is the first one i'm adding as my fav!

Author's Response: thanks! That really means a lot.

Reviewer: Ebony14
Date: 08/09/07 1:29
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

wow! i mean...WOW!!! it's damn good! brilliant idea and great writing. didn't feel like a 'fanfic' at all. u r really good. :-)

Author's Response: thanks a bunch! One of the nicest reviews I've had in awhile.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 06/25/07 10:34
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

Eeek. Creepy. And it makes you really hate Olive Hornby! I liked seeing poor, naive Myrtle though - this fic really made her character believable and pitiable. Plus, the ending was really chilling... But it definitely added to the story. It was great how sympathy for Myrtle was all wrapped up in the angstyness of the ending... Really a good fic!

Author's Response: Yay! A new review *cheers* Keeping Myrtle in character was difficult, so I'm glad it turned out... and the ending is my favorite. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 12/31/06 18:51
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

Ooh, this is good. Olive Hornby is an excellent character-- I know SO many girls like her. They seem nice at first, but they're really about as kind and caring as Tom Riddle.

I loved the ending. The dialogue sounds EXACTLY like how Lord Voldemort speaks in the books, and I can just imagine how eerie such words would sound coming from the mouth of some teenage studmuffin... EE!

This story is very well-done, and I've never seen a story like it before. I really enjoy it, and I think I like it almost as much as your Molly/Arthur piece!

Author's Response: ooh, a Shmergo review! *squee* MUST STAY CALM AND BREATHE. lol... thanks so much! Tom Riddle in the movies does such a fantastic job, I get a lot of inspiration from him! (Especially since he is most definetely a studmuffin.) It's great getting reviews on older stories... thanks so much!

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 10/02/06 8:50
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

well this story still leaves some unansweredd questions. I did however enjoy it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it- although I'm curious, what questions did it leave unanswered? (This story is part of a series, and if I know what you need answers to I might get inspired and make another story about it).

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it- although I'm curious, what questions did it leave unanswered? (This story is part of a series, and if I know what you need answers to I might get inspired and make another story about it).

Reviewer: floof
Date: 09/12/06 19:15
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

This was a very creative story about why Tom killed Myrtle. Good job.

Author's Response: thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: FrankieHart13
Date: 09/06/06 19:51
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

great story! i loved it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/18/06 16:15
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

wow thats great work for someone who doesn't know much about harry potter.

Author's Response: Glad you like it.... but when you say someone who doesn't know much about HP, you're not talking about me, are you???? If so, I must beg to differ. =)

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 07/09/06 18:41
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

ahhhh! Spooky....

Author's Response: Yeah, it is creepy.... I must say, by the way, it's awesome to have my favoritest author reviewing my stuff... thanks!

Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 06/15/06 18:37
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

I liked how you had the majority of the story in Myrtle's point of view, then switched for the last part. That's interesting how Moaning Myrtle recieved her name from her school days, and not actually when she was a ghost. I can see Olive doing that to her, as when I read the books I've always seen Myrtle as someone who kept to herself in school, cried to herself from time to time. Someone who was overall sad. I think you portrayed her nicely. Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! And I always saw her as a depressed person in her school days as well- the kid you don't always want to hate, but do anyways. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Darth Poopypants
Date: 05/17/06 0:57
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

Wow! This is really good, Chelsea, I love it!! In case you didn't know, this is Reeza from ES. Keep it up!!

Author's Response: thanks, I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 04/07/06 15:27
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

One, I'd like to say that Olive Hornby is pure, loathsome evil! Two, I LOVED YOUR STORY! Continue!!! I loved your characterization of Myrtle, how she was too easy to give up information. How she was called Moaning Myrtle before she died. I had always assumed it afterwards for some reason, but I like your idea better. (I would also wish to complement your bannermaker [I know this might be off topic]. The reason I came to read your fic was because I saw your banner on the forums and thought the story would be interesting.) I liked how Tom used his basilisk to get information on Myrtle's blood status. Obviously this means that basilisks can tell the difference in your fic. Also, I thought that, despite her evil, Olive was very well written, spite and all. She was very cunning and manipulative, and seems to be the kind of person to put a dead animal in someone's bed. All your characters were wonderful. You wrote them in a way that they felt the way they were described. Their aura's sort of leaped from the screen. Well done! 10/10. Keep writing, and don't let the minimum number of reviews weigh you down. You have talent. Please contact me when you update, and I will come back to read and review! I loved this, and I'm putting it into my favorites.

Author's Response: wow, thank you! I love how you guys loved the story so much. As said before, this will probably stay a one-shot. I may write more about Olive Hornby, because she's an interesting character, but this will probably be the last you see of Moaning Myrtle Sawyer- at least for awhile. And the banner IS wonderful, isn't it? Fly to Dawn made it. You should definetely go check out her stories, and get in touch with her whenever you need a banner. You're the first person to add me to your favorites for any story- I seriously feel touched! I'll definetely let you know if I write another one-shot on these characters or if I decide to continue this one. Until then, your review definetely gets a 10/10!

Reviewer: Fly to Dawn
Date: 04/03/06 4:37
Chapter: The Mudblood and the Dark Lord

Sorry it's taken me sooo long! Anyway, I absolutely loved the story - I loved how Olive Hornby was so loathsome, and Myrtle was really in characterm exactly how I thought she'd be. I'm waiting for the next chapter....and I'm feeling sorry for Myrtle :-(

Author's Response: sadly, this was a one-shot, so there is no next chapter, unfortunately. I might later write some more one-shots concerning Olive and Myrtle... poor dear, Olive does pick on her, doesn't she? But then again, with a name like Olive Hornby I can understand why she might need to lash out at people. thanks for the wonderful review- not to mention the banner!

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