Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/27/12 20:01
Chapter: The Last Chapter

That was a lovely story. It's nice to just read a romance and not have to worry about someone fighting--except at the wedding of course. Great story.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/27/12 19:56
Chapter: Mrs. Malfoy, again

Yay for Hermione! She broke up the fight when no one else could. How cute that Dobby hung up all the socks. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/24/12 15:57
Chapter: Social Event of the Decade

I'm glad Lucius didn't get any money back. I'm kind of jealous that Hermione is marrying for money and love:D I wish I could do that. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/24/12 15:43
Chapter: Prince or Pauper

The end of this chapter was so romantic. I hope Lucius doesn't find a loophole and get his fortune back. Although, Draco has an important position and may be on his way to making his own fortune. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/23/12 16:51
Chapter: A Snag in the Plans

I was wondering where Lucius was. I figured that was him behind Hermione. I wonder what Draco will have to pay for punching his father in public. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/23/12 15:54
Chapter: Most Eligible Bachelor

The best part was when Narcissa "sneered" at the party. I'm sure she could still have an engagement party if she wanted to. As Draco suggested, she probably loosened up after a few drinks. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/23/12 15:27
Chapter: Mrs. Malfoy

You seem to have a special talent for leaving things hanging. Alcohol seems to be the universal potion for smoothing things over. It appears that Mrs. Malfoy and Hermione got to know each other very well. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/23/12 0:53
Chapter: Decking the Halls

Now I'm starting to wonder if Draco really doesn't remember anything about proposing. I'd be excited if someone came and decorated my house for Christmas. I wonder how the meeting with Narcissa will go. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/22/12 20:36
Chapter: A Banquet and the Burrow

Draco seems like a pleasant drunk. The funniest part was when Draco referred to Hermione's parents as her "Muggles" in his drunken state. I wonder if he plans to propose. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/22/12 20:22
Chapter: Malfoy's Heir, or, Who Was the Overnight Guest

I'm disappointed in both Hermione and Harry. I don't think that one last time together is ever a good idea. On the other hand, it's cute that Draco wants to practice making an heir:D I really enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/22/12 20:08
Chapter: A Pub and A Tub

I hope it was Draco who jumped into Hermione's tub. Harry shouldn't be so wishy washy about who he wants to be with. That becomes unattractive after a while. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/22/12 19:21
Chapter: Second Chances

In view of all that has happened, I think Hermione's anger at Draco was unreasonable. I don't think Harry belonged there. He shouldn't have just let himself in. What surprised me the most in this chapter was the description of Harry as being 6'4". He's really not that tall. I'd believe Draco was that tall. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/22/12 18:47
Chapter: We Have Work to Do

I still think that Harry shouldn't have immediately gone to Ginny, especially since Hermione and Draco might have been on a business dinner. I am happy that Draco and Hermione finally got together though. Great chapter,.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/21/12 23:10
Chapter: Ministry Budget Cuts

Hermione was hardly at fault but now she's alone. Somehow I don't think Draco is out of the picture but has Harry gone running to Ginny? Harry and Hermione weren't a very interesting couple so I hope Draco comes around. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/21/12 20:24
Chapter: Dinner and a Dance

I wonder if Hermione will tell Harry about her dinner with Draco. I suppose she can write it off as a business dinner. If Hermione compares Harry and Draco right now I have a feeling that Harry will come up short.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/21/12 19:56
Chapter: There Was Draco

That was bold of Draco to go to Hermione's flat but what a way to win her favor. That was so nice of him to bring her soup and ginger ale. I'm sure she was startled by the kiss. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/21/12 18:49
Chapter: Flirtatious Behaviour

It seems strange to have Harry and Hermione together. It sounds like Draco is enjoying himself way too much during meetings. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/21/12 18:35
Chapter: The Banquet

That was mean of Draco--rescheduling the meeting for a week later. He could've kept working until she found her papers. For some reason, this chapter gave me a deja vu feeling. Great chapter.

Reviewer: LawraaaWeasley
Date: 12/30/11 21:35
Chapter: Malfoy's Heir, or, Who Was the Overnight Guest

I love this! It's so real and naturalistic, you can feel yourself getting to know the characters and the story! My favourite line was DEFINITELY “Are you insinuating that I’m fat?” she accused.
“No,” he said, his mouth full of cake, “I’m insinuating that I want all of the cake.”

Pure genius! (:

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/01/11 14:45
Chapter: There Was Draco

Oooh, temptation!

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