Reviews For Senses
Reviewer: Champion_Shoes
Date: 02/07/07 23:30
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

Well, the story concentrates on Ron/Hermione more than Ginny/Harry. I think it should stay where it is. Great job by the way.

Author's Response: It's already been moved. I was inclined to agree with you, but the mods seemed pretty positive it was a better fit. Thanks for reading =)

Reviewer: _Peeves_
Date: 02/07/07 20:15
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

omg omg omg!!! this is the best (and saddest, but who cares?) fan fic i've read so far. the only thing that will ruin it is if Hermione, Ginny, Ron, or Harry die. PLEASE don't kill them off!!!! i luv your fic still tho!

~When there's strife and when there's trouble, call on Peevesie he'll make double!~

Author's Response: Mwa ha ha haaaaaaa *cough* *shifty eyes* Ahem... thanks for reading, glad you liked it =)

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 02/07/07 20:08
Chapter: Dulling of the Senses

I like how you switch between their points of view. Very well done. Poor percy. Anyway, kudos to you :]

Author's Response: I enjoy the switching. It's a pain to write but quite effective with the telling of the story =)

Reviewer: XColliFlourX
Date: 02/07/07 12:30
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

GREAT thats the only word that covers the hole story!
plz update soon

Author's Response: Thank you =)

Reviewer: raveralways
Date: 02/07/07 11:58
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

doesn't matter what category it's in, I love it. I just found this story and im so glad i did. please don't keep us waiting too long.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Props to you for reading 75 pages worth of fanfic =)

Reviewer: h3art0f1nk
Date: 02/07/07 10:49
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

That was such a thrilling, exciting chapter. It was beautiful, and I can't wait for another excellent chapter to be posted. Also, I think that the R/Hr AND H/G category would be appropriate for this story. Happy writing!

Author's Response: Vote noted =) Yes, I thought this chapter was rather lovely even with all its darkness. Next one looks to be much the same if not more so...

Reviewer: Ozma333
Date: 02/07/07 9:22
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

yeah, it could probably be a R/Hr H/G story. This was once again fantastic, i love your writing style......magnificent! can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Moved =) Thanks dear, updating as soon as I can

Reviewer: heatg05
Date: 02/07/07 8:12
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

Personally, I don't think there's enough H/G to move it to the R/Hr and H/G category.

Author's Response: Yea, I hadn't thought so either, but I went ahead and moved it since the mods kept suggesting it.

Reviewer: heatg05
Date: 02/07/07 8:12
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

Personally, I don't think there's enough H/G to move it to the R/Hr and H/G category.

Author's Response: Yea, I hadn't thought so either, but I went ahead and moved it since the mods kept suggesting it.

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 02/06/07 20:57
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

Amazing chapter, as usual. I guess it would fit in R/Hr & H/G, but this story is more about Ron and Hermione. So I guess it would work either way. So I guess I'm no help at all.

Author's Response: Lol, no, you just perfectly summed up my dilemma! The story was placed in R/'Hr originally because I hadn't intended for it to have such a grand plotline beyond Ron getting Hermione to the hospital and perhaps her coming back to help him later. Once the plot began to change and grow, I realized I needed more, and the H/G perspectives were added. So, since it was a mod suggestion, I will probably move it to the new category in the end. It is very much R/Hr centric, but the coloring of the D/G dynamic should probably be noted =)

Reviewer: EmilyJayne
Date: 02/06/07 20:38
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

I don't care where it goes...just keep it matter the catergory....just update, update, update!

Author's Response: Lol, alright then! Will do as soon as I can =)

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 02/06/07 20:09
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

Amazing chapter, so heart wrenching. I actually think that senses would fit better in the dark/angst category. I love the couples don't get me wrong but it seems extremely dark to me. however, I do think that the R/H H/G category would be a better romance category fit.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. As for the category, yes, I have considered D/A before. This story grew from a three chapter semi-dramatic R/Hr story to a 16 chapter all out battle story. I've held back from moving it to that category because I believe, even amidst the obvious darkness of war, there is an unbelievably large amount of love and light, the most important part of the story in my mind, portrayed by the love between the characters. So, I'll add your vote to the R/H & H/G category =)

Reviewer: WeeMan9
Date: 02/06/07 19:52
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

This chapter was fantastic. My hat is off to you.

Author's Response: Why thank you!

Reviewer: PumPkin_JuiCe22
Date: 02/06/07 19:39
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

OMg i havent been on fanfiction for ever!! OMG you don tknow how long I have waited for this chapter and let me tell you, you did an amazing JOb as usually!!!!!OMg im gunna cry did she die or not.OMG ron should use avada kedavra on those jerks that was amazing beyond amazing!

Author's Response: Haha, wow, ok, thank you! Glad you liked the chapter. I'm not going to answer your question because, well, you'll find out in the next chapter at least partially. And yes, AK is probably the least that those jerks deserve, but I don't really think that's Ron's style ;)

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 02/06/07 19:35
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

Gosh - such a cliffie. They better all make it out of this

Author's Response: The next (and last) cliffie will be worse, just FYI. And as for them all making it out of this.... *insert evil author laugh*

Reviewer: BlizzCo
Date: 02/06/07 18:05
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

I can't wait for the next installment.

Please, don't take so long...

Author's Response: I promise I will update as quickly as possible. I make no assumptions about how my inspiration or the possibility of writer's block will affect me. I love this story, and my readers, too much to submit a chapter beneath my normal caliber of writing, so sometimes it takes a little while =)

Reviewer: Glittering_Pheonix
Date: 02/06/07 17:43
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

Wow... I know I have already told you this but you are such an amazing writer!! The way you describe their feelings is remarkable, especially their pain. You get a real sense of how they are feeling! I also love how you can put lots of details and still keep it at a quick pace, I have the hardest time doing that! You should move it to the R/Hr and H/G category. I soooo cannot wait till the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: *adds tally to changing category votes* Thanks! There is a school of thought that says less is more, but in my mind the more vivid the picture you can paint in the reader's mind the better. The fast pace just comes naturally, I think because the story is so intense (even I find myself having to sit back and take a breather sometimes). Updating a soon as possible =)

Reviewer: Lainie xox
Date: 02/06/07 17:11
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

I think it should be in H/G and R/Hr as well. Wonderful chapter... wonderfully written, that is. I'm really looking forward to finding out how it all ends. It's been a wonderful journey reading this fan fiction by you. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your vote! I'm glad you liked the chapter, the ending is coming scarily fast =/

Reviewer: futureMRSpadfoot
Date: 02/06/07 16:35
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

oh my! what a cliffy. I cant wait to find out what happens next, update soon :)

Author's Response: Will do, as soon as humanly possible. Just forewarning, next chapter's cliffie will be the worst yet.

Reviewer: ginny202
Date: 02/06/07 15:24
Chapter: Darkness Clouds the Senses

Oh. My. God. I almost FREAKED when I saw that another chapter had FINALLY been added! You should definately keep it in Angsty, because the romance-ish parts are a huge part of the anxiety of the whole story. SO DO NOT MOVE IT! Also, the Oh. My. God. at the beginning of my review was for the new chapter! it's GREAT! SO HURRY UP AND GET IT UPDATED!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Whoa, you freaked out my review page! Haha, actually my story is in Ron/Hermione, not Dark/Angsty, so the question is does it focused enough on H/G as well or should it remain totally R/Hr centric.

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