Reviews For Three Words
Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 10/09/06 17:40
Chapter: Oneshot

This story is cute and funny, and I do like it. The ending was great, too. But unfortunately, I ship myself with Theo Nott, and my portrayal of him is SO different from yours that that distracted me throughout the whole story. That's not your fault, though.

Author's Response: Haha, I've never met a Theo Nott fan before! Thanks so much for the wonderful review!

Reviewer: PansyP
Date: 09/09/06 14:24
Chapter: Oneshot

Wow I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: kkk
Date: 06/02/06 21:46
Chapter: Oneshot

ha,ha

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Purplemage
Date: 06/01/06 7:30
Chapter: Oneshot

Hey Gemma, great story! I really enjoyed it. I really liked your characterisation, especially the girls. The first scene when they're in the bathroom discussing their plan is lovely. I've always liked scenes where girls are putting make-up on. Pansy and Draco was also very endearing. "He could only say three words, and Gregory Goyle kept on picking his nose. Gregory’s nose, that is. Not Draco’s." I think that was my favorite line, it was so funny, it made me laugh out loud. The only problem I found is that there is too much american slang, for a second I forgot they were at Hogwarts. That's the only problem the rest was just lovely. Congratulations on getting thrid place!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I noticed that there was a bit of American slang, but ´not being British it would have been hard for me to change it to something else. Maybe next time I'll get a brit picker. Thanks again! PS- I like scenes with girls putting on make up too. :P

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 05/24/06 11:23
Chapter: Oneshot

sorry... my keyboard jamed. It really is a great story!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 05/24/06 11:22
Chapter: Oneshot

sorry... my keyboard jamed. It really is a great story!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 05/24/06 11:21
Chapter: Oneshot

this is great!!!!!!! It really is!!! It made me laugh soo loud!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it made you laugh!

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 05/24/06 11:21
Chapter: Oneshot

this is great!!!!!!! It really is!!! It made me laugh soo loud!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it made you laugh!

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 05/24/06 11:21
Chapter: Oneshot

this is great!!!!!!! It really is!!! It made me laugh soo loud!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it made you laugh!

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 05/24/06 10:17
Chapter: Oneshot

Excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ladyofthebookworms
Date: 05/24/06 10:00
Chapter: Oneshot

Hahahaha. Very funny.
I want some of that potion for my brother.

Author's Response: Thanks! Good luck on giving the potion to your brother. :D

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