Reviewer: weasleywannabe47
Date: 08/12/08 19:45
Chapter: Chapter One - Molly's Family

I loved how detailed it was!Good job!:)

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: hicktib
Date: 08/09/08 10:39
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

Wow, That was great, I loved all 4 chapters and I think you did a great job on this one.

Thanks for writing this.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so very happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: hicktib
Date: 08/08/08 21:35
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

This just keeps getting better and better.

Author's Response: Let me know what you think once you've finished it. And thank you for the nice comment.

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 07/14/08 7:59
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

lol i loved this as well
i like the idea of at leas one f ginnys children being named afer a weasley

and that dobbys involved =]
i miss dobby
and fred =[

Author's Response: I wrote this well before DH, and I just really wanted to imagine a happy ending - with all the grandchildren. But, the plot bunnies invaded and and brought about a bit more regarding the birth of Lily & Molly. Thank you so much for reading.

Reviewer: Gersknightlady
Date: 05/01/08 16:03
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

cute

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: misspoppy800
Date: 04/03/08 21:10
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

Absolutley stunning; fluffy, but stunning.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I am so happy when people still discover this story. So, glad you liked it.rn

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/18/08 0:09
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

aaawww!!! great names!!! i never would have thought of molly...

Author's Response: Really? Why not? Thank you for the wonderful reviews. If you get a chance, I would love for you to read my other story and give me your opinion. Thanks again!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/18/08 0:02
Chapter: Chapter Three - Birthing Babies

yay!!! that was sssooo cool!!! how did u come up with that?

Author's Response: IT was a bunny... it just hopped through my head one night. Thanks for your time... I am glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/17/08 23:53
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

lol!! i keep getting confused with all these children, but i enjoy the story anyway.

Author's Response: After the first chapter you are not required to remember all the children, they are really just there for effect. Well, until the end... where you really only need to remember that there are quite a few of them. I an gratified that you pushed past your confusion... I hope it all become clear in the end... Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/17/08 23:44
Chapter: Chapter One - Molly's Family

OoOoOo!!! good first chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/15/08 19:14
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

I loved this! James is one very special little boy isn't he? And Harry seems to have strengthened his mind alot. I was terrified when they said there was a problem, but what Harry and James did to help the birth was amazing! I can't believe they had the naming party on the same day as the birth! I can only conclude that witches recover quicker through potions and charms. Exdcellent. and I bet every woman wished her husband could take the majority of the labour pains too. Ron's alot more confident than he used to be, it's lovely to see, I'm guessing it'spartly Hermione's doing and partly his personal achievements. You must write a sequel!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, and especially for the kind words. I am so happy that this story still gets attention after all this time. I would love to write a sequel to this story, but it will have to wait until my other story "Harry Potter and the Heart of the Hero" is finished... and well sadly I am a little stalled at the moment. If you have the time, please give that story a read and give me a review there as well. Again thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Biscuits
Date: 10/12/07 10:28
Chapter: Chapter One - Molly's Family

So far, a very good fic. The children all have distinct personalities it seems, as well as being similar to their siblings, cousins and parents like any family would be. I thought this was well done. The sheer amount of children is incredibly Weasley-ish, although slightly tedious to get through each one, it had to be done.

Molly Weasley was well characterised i thought, with her mothering tendancies. I particularly liked the emphasis placed on the table and filling the table, as this seemed a very Molly thing to do and showed her love of a huge family well.

The description in the chapter was also good, particualry in describing the house. Overall, I thought it was a very good opening chapter, especially the mini-cliffhanger at the end.

Author's Response: Well, thank you. I do hope you kept reading after the first chapter and found the remaining chapters acceptable as well? I will look for your final word in the whole story. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Miss__Ginny__Potter
Date: 09/08/07 11:00
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

that was such a good story! i love post hogwarts fics especially if it is a Harry/Ginny and dealing with their children. That was fabulous! i love how you made each character so different and so personal~ you did a great job!

congrats,
Lauryn (Miss__Ginny__Potter)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am pleased that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: deidre
Date: 09/04/07 12:39
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

wow thats wonderful i've loved it thanks a lot and my best compliments

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: steviegrules
Date: 08/27/07 0:28
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

cute ending, and good names! and i was really happy that remus' son was named sirius. i liked it...tho i still think that harry sounds way to 'big man' for my liking, ( kinda like when small town ppl think that theyre from like bel air or something, and start acting all posh...just to clear up what i was saying about him)

Author's Response: At least you liked the ending... And I get what you're saying about Harry, but I can assure you it is not intended. I'll re-read it and see if I can see it your way.
Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: steviegrules
Date: 08/27/07 0:16
Chapter: Chapter Three - Birthing Babies

im sorry...but this story is pretty good and everything, but are you english? im guessing your not, cause you say " my love" waaay to much..and husband and wife dont normally call each other " mr and mrs potter", maybe after the first few weeks of marriage....and again, harry still sounds really pompous! like hes this big man, up in his manor, kinda like malfoy, cept not so...mean. im not trying to be mean, im really not! i just think that as a writer you should take comments, both good and bad, in your stride, which you probably will. on the other hand, im glad that the kiddies are safe, i thought something was gonna happen to them, and i hated that agatha girl...tho i like the name :D

Author's Response: No I am not English. I wrote this story about people to whom love is very important, and who in my mind are still very much in love after several years of marriage. I have heard the saying about the English, that they only show affection to dogs and horses. TO me that seems a very aristocratic notion... and one I as the author chose to ignore. I am sorry you didn't like it... As I said previously you are entitled to your opinion and I am very happy to hear it. I am curious what specific dialog makes you feel that Harry sounds pompous? Or is it just the idea of the Manor that gives you this feeling?
Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: steviegrules
Date: 08/26/07 23:59
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

honestly? good, but way too cheesy, rons whole " to the women of your lives.." speech was unneccesary and ron would never say that....ever. o and you have a weird taste in names....
ps- harry sounds like a pompous arse

Author's Response: I am very happy that you reviewed. I do like to hear opposing opinions and I am not going to try to rebut yours. Only tell you that you are entitled to it. Some of the children's name are older and out of fashion, but they are all real names... If that makes them weird, so be it. I thought Hermione once fell into that catagory until it was re popularized through the first few books.
So, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: GryffindorGal87
Date: 08/22/07 21:40
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

I loved it! It was so sweet. I really liked what you did with Dobby and Winky. I really do hope you continue this in another story; after all, James did say they are "special sisters" ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading my story! I am very glad you liked it. From time to time I read it through myself and consider if I should continue with it.... But, I feel like I need to work on my Epic - "Heart of the Hero," version of book seven before I return to this one, Still is is most gratifying to know that new people occasionally find and read this fun little story and are moved by it... For that I genuinely thank you.

Reviewer: GryffindorGal87
Date: 08/22/07 21:37
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

I loved it! It was so sweet. I really liked what you did with Dobby and Winky. I really do hope you continue this in another story; after all, James did say they are "special sisters" ;)

Author's Response: See, previous response.

Reviewer: stefi9
Date: 06/19/07 21:38
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

is it just me or did you make james a litttle too jesus-y? loved the story thugh. for a minute there thought you might kill ginny. 10/10

Author's Response: Hmmm... If James was Jesus-y... Believe me it was not intentional. And as for killing Ginny? Not me!

I am so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading.

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