Reviewer: wolverine83
Date: 03/05/08 7:59
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Prelude to Unpleasant Things

creapy, very good, cain't wait for more.


Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. :) I will be posting more after the site gets fixed up, or if you want to read things faster I have the complete story posted at schnoogle and fanfiction.net under the same user name. :D

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/24/07 9:38
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Prelude to Unpleasant Things

A really gripping start, well written and detailed. And yet despite all the detail, it is not obvious what is to follow, you've really made sure your readers stick around to find out more.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review (way back when). It's always wonderful to hear from readers. I never got an email notice that anyone had reviewed, plus I'd actually forgotten that I'd posted anything on mugglenet. :p As soon as the archive is back up and running I'll post the rest of the story. If you don't want to wait it's on fanfiction.net and schnoogle. best, Methyl

Reviewer: Masked One
Date: 01/19/07 23:43
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Prelude to Unpleasant Things

Oh! This is delightful. I really love the way youíve given this story a very fantasyish tone, but kept it so nicely in the Potterworld. I love the subtle way you describe Arcana, slipping in the height, the paleness, the claws, pointy ears, agelessness. Excellent. The dynamic between her and the shop owner is lovely as well, especial the subtle sadness when she leaves. I really enjoyed this!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review (way back when). I never got an email notice that anyone had reviewed, plus I'd actually forgotten that I'd posted anything on mugglenet. :p I'm a big fan of folklore and the faeriefolk, so there'll be no shortage of that. It's tricky to get Arcana to come across the way she is in my head. I'm glad the words painted the right picture. And good Jeriol Ironcraft will be back, that's for sure. As soon as the archive is back up and running I'll post the rest of the story. If you don't want to wait it's on fanfiction.net and schnoogle. best, Methyl

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