please tell me youre going to update again...

Please update you have fans that really want to see how you end this terrific story.

oh my godric why isnt this finished talk about a cliff hanger

this has a very good plot, and i really like it! there are some spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing a quick run through wouldnt fix. :)

I loved it! in the end what did dumbledore want to talk to her about?

PLEASE UPDATE SOON :D

this is like one of the best stories ive read on here soo far, and you updated it a year ago!! To stop There of all places! You shouldn't start something you aren't going to finish. I dont know if you get notified when you get a review, but i hope so. Please read the comment before mine and knkkow that i second it!:)

UPDATE SOON!! PLLLLLLEEEAAASSSSSEEEEE?????!?!?!

i like

Hi TwinSuns

I don't usually read fanfiction, but a friend of mine directed me towards this story. I started reading, not really expecting too much of it, but...as many others have said, it's brilliant. I really like the interludes, giving us insight into other character's actions. I also like Alice, she seems sort of fragile, yet she is very strong. Lily seems real and mature and I can really connect with her thinking. The story unfolds slow enough to really appreciate all the little details, yet it's never too slow to the point where it would become boring. The characters seem very real and I've already mentioned the very insightful interludes, which bring a whole new level to the story. I hope you continue writing this as it is a joy to read :)