Reviews For My Deliverance
Reviewer: DeathlyHallows1228
Date: 09/05/12 2:10
Chapter: Prologue

PLEASE PLEE PLEASE FINISH THIS! I AM BEGGING YOU! THIS IS AMAZING! YOU CAN'T LEAVE ALL OF YOUR FANS HANGING!!!

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 02/18/12 9:41
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Bonded

please tell me youre going to update again...

Reviewer: emrossi
Date: 01/10/12 18:39
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Bonded

I just discovered this story. I love it. It's extremely well written and you feel as if you are Lily going through her life. I hope you can find time to finish it.

Reviewer: dbquills
Date: 01/07/12 8:07
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Bonded

Please update you have fans that really want to see how you end this terrific story.

Reviewer: magicalmartha
Date: 12/21/11 21:21
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Bonded

please,please finish this story! you can't leave it hanging!

Reviewer: Sasha Hawthorn
Date: 10/19/11 1:49
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Bonded

oh my godric why isnt this finished talk about a cliff hanger

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/29/11 16:58
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Missing Piece

aww i bet that broke his heart

Reviewer: PinkCoconutIce
Date: 05/14/11 19:40
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Bonded

this has a very good plot, and i really like it! there are some spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing a quick run through wouldnt fix. :)

Reviewer: Jellyfish13
Date: 03/23/11 11:03
Chapter: Prologue

I loved it! in the end what did dumbledore want to talk to her about?

Reviewer: Jellyfish13
Date: 03/23/11 11:03
Chapter: Prologue

I loved it! in the end what did dumbledore want to talk to her about?

Reviewer: Jellyfish13
Date: 03/23/11 11:03
Chapter: Prologue

I loved it! in the end what did dumbledore want to talk to her about?

Reviewer: Scout_1611
Date: 01/06/11 16:23
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Bonded

PLEASE UPDATE SOON :D

Reviewer: Lily29
Date: 11/27/10 22:45
Chapter: Prologue

ooooh mysterious and promising....!!!!

Reviewer: Chocolat
Date: 10/17/10 0:19
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Bonded

this is like one of the best stories ive read on here soo far, and you updated it a year ago!! To stop There of all places! You shouldn't start something you aren't going to finish. I dont know if you get notified when you get a review, but i hope so. Please read the comment before mine and knkkow that i second it!:)

Reviewer: cebascle
Date: 10/04/10 13:26
Chapter: Chapter One: Lost in Thought

Oh my goodness! this is so good! you are a born writer!

Reviewer: missevans7068
Date: 09/02/10 12:20
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Bonded

UPDATE SOON!! PLLLLLLEEEAAASSSSSEEEEE?????!?!?!

Reviewer: missevans7068
Date: 09/02/10 12:02
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

haha interesting, eh?

Reviewer: missevans7068
Date: 09/02/10 10:38
Chapter: Chapter Three: Through Unveiled Eyes

i like

Reviewer: missevans7068
Date: 09/02/10 10:29
Chapter: Interlude II

pretty good...
but kind of bored me in a way

Reviewer: frostyfrost
Date: 08/31/10 9:39
Chapter: Prologue

Hi TwinSuns

I don't usually read fanfiction, but a friend of mine directed me towards this story. I started reading, not really expecting too much of it, but...as many others have said, it's brilliant. I really like the interludes, giving us insight into other character's actions. I also like Alice, she seems sort of fragile, yet she is very strong. Lily seems real and mature and I can really connect with her thinking. The story unfolds slow enough to really appreciate all the little details, yet it's never too slow to the point where it would become boring. The characters seem very real and I've already mentioned the very insightful interludes, which bring a whole new level to the story. I hope you continue writing this as it is a joy to read :)

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