Reviews For Love, Luna
Reviewer: kennedyfreak
Date: 03/28/09 22:24
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

dear luna,
Can you think of something to do if a blibbering humdinger or two gets loose in a charms lesson, causing everyone's names to become dooble fnoodle,
sincerely, Justin Case

Reviewer: Pretty_Fangirl
Date: 04/19/08 22:43
Chapter: Destroyer of Pretty Girls

Awesome! I loved that!

Reviewer: tc015
Date: 03/22/08 12:24
Chapter: Destroyer of Pretty Girls

I love Luna, and I really enjoyed reading you story. Luna has an amazing sense of humor, and it showed here.

Luna's revenge on Hermione is so perfect. I love the idea of her using one of her dad's creature on Hermione. It's funny that she's being sabotaged by a creature that doesn't believe exists.

I love the idea of Luna attacking Hermione's SPEWly efforts. Ron doesn't like SPEW, and would probably be grateful that someone hurt Hermione's efforts there.

I love how Luna's revenge backfired. It's funny that the Woolyshuck ate everyone's socks. I can imagine Luna finding all of her clothing eaten; it's probably worse considering how all the people stole her clothing in OotP.

Luna's suggestions are so funny. I can imagine the person who wrote the letter trying to find Nargles. I love how Luna seems to know so much about Antarctica; it seems like the perfect place to find her creatures. I love Luna's comment on sending her Neptune; it's so much like Luna to think of sending someone to another planet.

I really liked this story overall. Luna's the perfect character to write an advice column; she seems to have knowledge on everything. Good job with updating the archive, and hopefully your job as a mod will be less stressful now!

~ Teresa

Reviewer: Metropolitan
Date: 09/03/07 6:29
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

That Chapter was particularly funny. But Luna, you do have a bit of fashion sense..... say Bill's wedding?

Reviewer: Kathyhermy123
Date: 08/27/07 12:26
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

Oh! I'm in such difficulty - there is this boy, who is really gorgeous, but his best friend has really badly gelled hair, always wears this awful colegne, has a crush on me (eww!), and is altogether soo wierd. He's unpopular, too, and I can't understand why on earth the gorgeous boy that I mentioned hangs out with him! How, Luna, how can I possibly snag this must-have guy without getting his must-not friend too?

~Romantic without Hope

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 08/24/07 11:17
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

Oh, I love your story! You give such great advice! I am without a problem right now, but keep giving out great advice!

Reviewer: aliauthor
Date: 08/23/07 12:18
Chapter: Destroyer of Pretty Girls

Great idea! all in all I can hear Luna's voice in this, though the bit about the wooly (scrolls up to check the name) woolyshucks doesn't sound like something Luna would do.

Reviewer: fillibuster_firework
Date: 08/08/07 15:43
Chapter: Destroyer of Pretty Girls

hehehe. That was a REALLY funny chapter. I really like it. Great work so far!

Reviewer: redhead_weasley08
Date: 08/06/07 22:19
Chapter: Destroyer of Pretty Girls

Wow. I love this story! It's hilarious and you sound just like Luna would. How about using my question:

Dear Luna,
I'm in love with my best friend's crush, and my best friend's crush likes me. The only problem is that when my best friend found out that he took me to Hogsmeade, she hexed me so fingernails grow a mile a minute. What can I do to make things better? (The fingernails, plus my best friend, and the guy.)

- Fingernails of Doom

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/06/07 18:35
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

Good thinking slappin on that disclaimer. I'm sure that there were many hopefuls out there already putting on the black robes and throwing away their shampoo. I would like you to consider my letter, which is in my first review. Awesome job with this story. :D

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/06/07 18:30
Chapter: Destroyer of Pretty Girls

Ha ha, great job! You sounded just like Luna. And, just because I'm curious as to how Luna would handle this situation, here is my letter:
Dear Luna,
My boyfriend and I have been together for almost a year. However, he only seems to get me jewelry for presents, and I only give him items from his favorite Quidditch team. I just can't think of what else to get him, even though I know so much about him. Is this a snag in our relationship, or am I overreacting? And does this mean that neither of us really know each other, or are we just not creative?
Yours quite sincerely,
Inexerienced Gift-Giver

You don't have to use it; I know how many letters you must get, so I won't be offended. This story is really starting up nicely. :D

Reviewer: Mnemone Radford
Date: 08/04/07 12:26
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

Dear Luna,

I have long suffered from being very freckly, and I still haven't resigned myself to the fact. I became frustrated with my appearance and decided to take it upon myself to fix it and get rid of my freckles once and for all, since my dear mother refused to take me to St. Mungo's. Alas, if only she had...

Now, I've never been very good at Charms, let alone inventing new ones (I think you can guess where this is going). As it is, I have no idea whether the spell I chose actually existed and I just messed it up (pronunciation, wand movement, or otherwise), or if it was actually supposed to yield such drastically different results than I had expected (well, hoped for).
You see, I had somehow magicked my freckles to form words and write out my current thoughts for the world to see. This is especially incovenient because I'm a bit of a liar. You'd think I'd try to stop now that it was pointless and would be rather embarassing, but I'm finding it rather hard to break the habit, despite the fact that my face has become some giant, screwed-up news ticker. What's worse is that my lovely mother still won't take me to St. Mungo's. She seems to find my plight very amusing, and says it serves me right for trying to mess around with magic. I got grounded for calling her some bad names inside my head (therefore scrawled across my face in, unfortunately, very legible handwriting) when she told me this. Oh Luna, what in Merlin's name am I to do?
Help me!
-Freaky Freckles

Reviewer: hermionerocks42
Date: 08/02/07 11:56
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

what about a "My sister is way too busy for me topic?"

Reviewer: Luna_and_Harry
Date: 08/01/07 19:06
Chapter: Destroyer of Pretty Girls

Dear Luna,
My little sister never stops talking. When i put a silencing charm on her, my parents took away my broomstick for a month. What can I do to make her shut up?
Soon To Be Deaf

Reviewer: Merry Berry
Date: 08/01/07 15:28
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

Dear Luna,
I really really like this guy but he likes someone and just recently I have discovered that this one boy likes me and that the girl that the guy I like likes this boy all in all I'd have to say our love lifes are a mess. How do I fix something like this.
Confused and In love

Reviewer: Merry Berry
Date: 08/01/07 15:15
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

Dear Luna,
I really really like this guy but he likes someone and just recently I have discovered that this one boy likes me and that the girl that the guy I like likes this boy all in all I'd have to say our love lifes are a mess. How do I fix something like this.
Confused and In love

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 07/31/07 19:56
Chapter: Destroyer of Pretty Girls


Reviewer: holey_jamey
Date: 07/31/07 18:29
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

There's are so funny. Here's a submission:

Dear Luna,
I recently invented a potion that causes plants to grow very quickly. It's being regarded as the best Herbology break-through in centuries. It will cause Mandrakes to age quicker in order to reach maturity in a few days. I've been invited to demonstrate in front of a large room of first-class Herbologists exactly how to make the potion.

Here's my problem: I don't know how I did it! My brother had a cauldron brewing and I threw random ingredients into it, stirring whenver I felt like it. I then spilled some potion on a dandelion which grew quickly. I have no idea what I should do for the demonstration. My fame and reputation lies in your hands!


Reviewer: LUV2READ
Date: 07/30/07 14:20
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

THis was hilarious! Luna is so funny! And I think that it would be just like her to impersonate someone for a job interview!


Reviewer: 11marauderette11
Date: 07/30/07 9:55
Chapter: Fashion Disaster

Dear Luna,

I have beautiful shoulder legnth black hair, that is slick and shines because of my special shampoo 'Greasy Gits.'

It has special ingredients of :
Grease, Oil, water, salt, sodium and grease solution, mayonnaise, and more oil.
Fragrance : mayonnaise and rotten egg.

It is the most amazing shampoo and gives my hair a glow that EVERYBODY is jealous of!

But...I have a problem! (I hope when you read this it was as dramatic as when I wrote it.)

One day I picked the WRONG SHAMPOO!! Dear Slytherins Socks! It was horrible! It was called 'Soft and Silky' and had 'for Greasy Gits' written underneath so obviously I thought it was the same. I used it and...MY HAIR! it horrid, it doesn't even drip oil onto the floor anymore! And my old shampoo is GONE! I can't find it anywhere! Boohoo!

Please Help me Luna, The ladies are already acting strange!

A (previously) Greasy Git.

There you go! I hope you use it! I love your story by the way! Its AWESOME!

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