Reviews For Storm of Darkness
Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 03/08/11 21:28
Chapter: In Closing

Awesome story!! You would have done better without the vampires I mean too much twilight, but I cried in lots of parts, trust me :)

Reviewer: HG-HP-fan
Date: 07/23/10 1:00
Chapter: The Muggle Cabin

There may not be any action, but this is intreging just the same. It gives iformation that was actually reveiled tin DH. I like it.

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/23/08 11:02
Chapter: Deliverance

Love Harry's disguise and Hermiones new aditude .

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/23/08 11:02
Chapter: Deliverance

Love Harry's disguise and Hermionies new aditude .

Reviewer: prav
Date: 01/27/08 1:52
Chapter: In Closing

nice one..

Reviewer: DarkJoker
Date: 10/14/07 5:05
Chapter: The Safety of One's Company

You had to turn them into killers...oh well thats the way of the world, kill or get killed...

Reviewer: Angel of Dreams
Date: 09/23/07 21:53
Chapter: One of Us

Wow. This chapter was terrifying, and I am shocked what those vampires did to Hagrid. It proved absolutely shocking, and the fact that Hermione nearly becomes a vampire herself really brings a shocking light to the story. Great work, although I would have preferred that Hagrid had not gotten involved (he's not one of my favourite characters). Hermione's descent into darkness and her fight to stop it is really quite touching, though.

Reviewer: siriusrox26
Date: 09/23/07 10:57
Chapter: In Closing


Reviewer: Molly Wobbles
Date: 08/02/07 10:23
Chapter: Swallowed

What an excellent story! You are a very talented writer, and it was a brillant plot! I found your work so good I found that I was actully thinking JKRowling wrote it! Write more...Write more!

Author's Response: thank you so much!!! i actually have another fic called Mortality if you are interested in reading some of my other stuff!!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 07/29/07 9:19
Chapter: In Closing

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!! The vampire chapters gave me chills, and so did the Ginny chapters. You are an excellent writer. If I ever read a book you publish, I will instantly recognize your style. it's wonderful. Wonderful story, wonderful.

Author's Response: thanks so much...i appreciate that!

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 04/10/07 16:09
Chapter: In Closing

um...incredible? i'm a little astounded right now. so dark but so beautiful, and sooo gloriously written.

Author's Response: thanks so much for that comment. i can't wait to read your story...probably tomorrow, considering i'm totally and completely exhausted from spring break. check out my new story (hope it gets validated soon) called "Mortality."

Reviewer: AnneLea
Date: 03/21/07 20:13
Chapter: In Closing

Can I quit crying yet?

Reviewer: AnneLea
Date: 03/21/07 18:50
Chapter: Dead

Ahah! It does work both ways after all!

Reviewer: AnneLea
Date: 03/21/07 17:49
Chapter: Deliverance

I originally expected it to be Snape. Cool!

Reviewer: AnneLea
Date: 03/21/07 16:49
Chapter: Servant

I'm too busy crying to say more at the moment...

Reviewer: LoOnY_for_Harry
Date: 03/19/07 19:28
Chapter: In Closing

This chapter was beautiful! I loved all of the reasons why he had to return, his feelings for his deceased loved ones, and the fact that Flamel ruled the realm beyond the Veil. The ending was one that could make you smile if you were in the worst of moods, and could bring a happy tear to your eye at the fact that Harry's burden had been lifted.
The bad part about the ending was the fact that... it ended! I thoroughly enjoyed every word of this story.... contrary to what you said, it wasn't a "nice" ride. It was a wonderful one.
Keep up the awesome writing! Thanks for this great imagining of Harry's final thunder clap in the "Storm of Darkness"!

Author's Response: thanks very much! hope you check out my new story (if it gets accepted) called "Mortality".

Reviewer: FutureMalfoy
Date: 03/15/07 14:15
Chapter: Servant

This was the best chap so far. The way Bellatrix's part was written was so much the way JKR would have. I've read many stories with her in them and she was never quite as cruel as she actuall is. Very well written.

Reviewer: LoOnY_for_Harry
Date: 03/12/07 7:05
Chapter: Now, You Die

NO! Harry can't be dead!!! Voldemort can, but not Harry!
I can't wait to find out what happens, but I don't want this story to end!
Anyway, great chapter, it was only a tiny bit rushed, but other than that, it was wonderful, as always!

Reviewer: eternityzangel
Date: 03/02/07 21:24
Chapter: In Closing

i loved the whole veil thing.

I also loved ur story!

i wish i could write, but alas am always rejected (well my first story was rejected, although i did write it in half an hour.....)

Author's Response: keep going!!! write again and see if they validate you. it took me five times before they said yes to this story! and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Faethe
Date: 02/20/07 18:48
Chapter: In Closing

That was a very good ending to this great story! I hope there might be a sequal? Anyway I have enjoyed this story a lot. Thank you for sharing it with us. :)

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