Reviewer: Victoire
Date: 07/29/08 0:00
Chapter: one-shot

Poor Jocelyn... :( I'm in a rather sour mood now. Really, must you be such a damned good writer ?!

Reviewer: Black_For_EVER
Date: 09/21/06 12:49
Chapter: one-shot

I want more!!!!!!!
You rock!

Reviewer: siriusly_ginny
Date: 09/04/06 9:16
Chapter: one-shot

its really good,but i LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEDDDDDD canis majoris!!!!!

Reviewer: siriusly_ginny
Date: 09/04/06 9:16
Chapter: one-shot

its really good,but i LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEDDDDDD canis majoris!!!!!

Reviewer: meryal
Date: 09/03/06 19:53
Chapter: one-shot

Wow, that was really good. Kinda of depressing but good! I love the Jocelyn/Sirius story line! Keep Writing!

Reviewer: JFig
Date: 08/27/06 21:59
Chapter: one-shot

I've missed your updates. This was a lovely comeback.

Thank you.

Reviewer: NIcerDraco2025
Date: 08/26/06 20:08
Chapter: one-shot

Ouch. At least I knew it wouldn't be happy this time. As much as I hate the way it goes, this is a brilliant story. I repeat: brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. I'm amazed that you can write like this and also do Masquerade Cliche. (Can you write more on that soon?) You are really good. Write more, and soon.

Reviewer: self named harry potter freak
Date: 08/26/06 13:13
Chapter: one-shot

I have been an avid follower of Canis Majoris, and when it ended I wanted a sequel where everything would turn out right, where Jocelyn would get toghther with Sirius and leave Hector in the dust, where her life would turn out so much different than this. In her time of insecurity she turned to safety, and it turned out to be too safe. In the middle of this I was almost crying for her. I don't know how she feels, but from your description I can imagine the horror pretty well. Please say that one of these days the old Jocelyn will come to the surface again. Please say that Jocelyn will break free of the Imperoius Curse of numbness that is keeping her supressed and unfeeling. Let her see for an entire day what has happened, and let her realize how she can fix it. Sirius. But by that time Sirius will be about ready to take that trip to azkban, won't he? She'll get him back for maybe 6 months and then he'll be gone. Then the question becomes, will it destroy he more than she already is to have that happen, or will she not take the chance?

I read this and had to look up the song at the begining to hear it. It is the most perfectly compatible song for a fic that I've ever read. I went back and reread it with the music and tears were streaming down my face. If you can envoke that sort of emothion in a reader, then you are one great writer. Cheers to you.

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