Reviewer: LoveYouAlways
Date: 12/23/11 23:10
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning

Wonderful story! Loved how you tied in all of the other. Hats gets like narcissa and andromeda. I love fluff but this story had more than fluff! Your an amazing writer and love all of your canon stories

Reviewer: hplvr1
Date: 10/21/10 18:30
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning

That was a perfect way to end! I loved it!

Reviewer: esmecullen
Date: 05/07/10 9:55
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning

I'm guessing 'William' was Bill then.

Reviewer: willowy-lily tree
Date: 04/27/10 17:56
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning

a really good take on the start of their relationship, i liked it a lot, although some of the facts are not completely right, still one of the better stories I've read.

Reviewer: Black Star
Date: 04/07/10 14:37
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning

Too Sweet! Excellent characterisation and character development. The new characters, like Shane and Mieve, were really likable and believable. The Fred and George mice were inspired and the ending was the cherry on the cake. Lastly, I liked the way you drew out the conclusion. I'd keep thinking, now it will happen, but they'd fumble again and I'd want to keep on reading to find out what will happen next.

Reviewer: hermione2012
Date: 04/07/10 1:17
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning

This was a good quick read. I loved it! i laughed to hard at the end. It was very sweet. Good writing

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 04/05/10 12:28
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning


Reviewer: Alice-Olivia
Date: 03/05/10 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning

Great story, especially the William part.

Reviewer: Alan Prewitt
Date: 03/03/10 14:56
Chapter: Prefects & Fellytones

Great job! I was uneasy at first to read it, thinking it might be cheesy and cliché, but you quickly proved me wrong. I loved this story. Very well written, and the characters were spot on. Brilliant job.

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/02/10 16:15
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning


Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/02/10 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 7: Late Night Escapades.

lovely, quit magnificent ide say myself

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/02/10 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 5: Library Research

outstanding if your brother and sister dident say anything they re apsoulutaly right

Reviewer: Luna Thomas
Date: 03/02/10 15:31
Chapter: Prefects & Fellytones

really good i always wonderd how they turned out molly soo clean and straight when arther likes messy and clumsy?? well opsites attraced i guess!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/27/10 8:41
Chapter: Chapter 10: The Beginning

How sweet!! Now we know where William and Fred and George got their names. I really enjoyed this story. I'm glad it was featured or I probably never would've found it. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/27/10 8:33
Chapter: Chapter 9: Fred and George

I still want to shake Arthur. Why did he think Molly had the responsibility of saying something? Arthur's just assuming stuff and you know what they say about that:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/27/10 8:25
Chapter: Chapter 8: The Shane

It's funny to think of Arthur as being so shy now but going on to have seven children with Molly. And, those children certainly weren't shy. This is such a nice look at Arthur and Molly when they were younger. Since so little is written on this topic it would seem to be fertile ground for many authors. Great chapter.

Reviewer: decdraft
Date: 02/27/10 7:33
Chapter: Prefects & Fellytones

Well written, sweet story. Loved getting a peak at that generation. Characters were spot on. Will have to check and see if you have written some more, enojoyed this a lot. Well done!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/26/10 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 7: Late Night Escapades.

They stayed out half the night and Arthur still can't tell Molly how he feels! I think she should just go with the flow--maybe he's never going to tell her how he feels:D Some guys are like that. The part I liked best was the Quidditch commentary--what was it the Banshee Strategy?? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/26/10 14:13
Chapter: Chapter 6: Are You A Gryffindor?

It was interesting to see the young Lucius Malfoy and Narcissa Black. Andromeda too--you don't usually hear a lot about her. Geez Arthur--do we have to knock you down and drag your interest in Molly out of you:P I liked Maeve's statement at the beginning--something to the effect of "we'll just have to try harder next time." Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/26/10 13:49
Chapter: Chapter 5: Library Research

I'm getting ready to slap some sense into Arthur. He's been given all of these opportunities to talk to Molly but he just can't do it. Geez, even when Molly outright asked him if he had something to say he couldn't say anything. I'm thinking that Molly will take matters into her own hands pretty soon. Great chapter.

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