Reviews For A Last Goodbye
Reviewer: Padfoot11333
Date: 03/09/11 15:32
Chapter: one-shot

This was so sad...

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 02/22/11 13:46
Chapter: one-shot

wowww :D i really liked this . . . you should write more from sirius' POV. you're good at it :D

Reviewer: ickleluna
Date: 01/28/11 21:40
Chapter: one-shot

i'm sitting here crying... this was just so wonderful!

Reviewer: Daughter of the Light
Date: 08/01/10 6:47
Chapter: one-shot

I don't quite know what to say, except that this made me cry. And I would say that's a good thing.

Reviewer: Lily Cambers
Date: 03/08/09 23:13
Chapter: one-shot

that was sooo sad and beautiful....

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 11/17/08 19:41
Chapter: one-shot

the juxtaposition of memories with the present makes the pain of James and Lily's deaths that much more powerful.
very beautifully written.

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 06/20/08 13:12
Chapter: one-shot

I..I can't type--I...*sobs shake me* I'm c-crying...I so loved James and S-Sirius...and the last paragraph and the last sentence, I-I....

Y-You're a fantastic writer. Siriusly, you are.

Reviewer: LunaWorshiper
Date: 03/23/08 15:12
Chapter: one-shot

I relly loved this! It was a great story and really well written. Great Job! =^.^=

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 02/14/08 12:35
Chapter: one-shot

:'( the end bit was sooooo saaaddddd... :( but it was very affecting - or is 'effecting'? ah, well... the fact is, it's very sweet and i like it very much *sniff sniff* oh dear, there i go again. well, thanks for writing that story. i know that sounds silly, but... ah, well... i enjoyed the story. good one :)

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 01/27/08 14:40
Chapter: one-shot

OMGOSH I LIVE THIS i cried like 5 times sooo goooooood i love it i love it i love it i just love how sirius went an took the picture and kept it that was soooo sweeeeeeeeeeet *sniffles*

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: dark_dreamer
Date: 12/11/07 0:53
Chapter: one-shot

wow. that was an amazing story. i loved the part where harry was born . it was pure genius.

i felt tears in my eyes when i read the last paragraph of sirus' thoughts when he said bye. it was so beautiful, yet so sad.

anyway i will love to read more of your sotries. well done *claps*

Reviewer: dark_dreamer
Date: 12/11/07 0:53
Chapter: one-shot

Hagrid revved up my motorcycle. I watched until he and my godson were no more than a speck in the dark, dark sky.



“Goodbye.” I whispered into the night. It was more than just a goodbye to my godson, it was a goodbye to everything I had ever known, everything I had ever lived for. It was a goodbye to James, the best friend I had ever had. It was a goodbye to Lily, who I had grown to care about as if she were my own sister. It was a goodbye to Remus, who would believe I was a traitor. It was a goodbye to the Peter I had thought I could trust. But most of all, it was a goodbye to the old Sirius. The Sirius who could laugh and joke, who could smile and play. It was, in essence, a goodbye to hope.



Slowly, I turned my back to the destroyed house, and walked away into the darkness.


i can just read that over and over *sighs*

Reviewer: dark_dreamer
Date: 12/11/07 0:52
Chapter: one-shot

Hagrid revved up my motorcycle. I watched until he and my godson were no more than a speck in the dark, dark sky.



“Goodbye.” I whispered into the night. It was more than just a goodbye to my godson, it was a goodbye to everything I had ever known, everything I had ever lived for. It was a goodbye to James, the best friend I had ever had. It was a goodbye to Lily, who I had grown to care about as if she were my own sister. It was a goodbye to Remus, who would believe I was a traitor. It was a goodbye to the Peter I had thought I could trust. But most of all, it was a goodbye to the old Sirius. The Sirius who could laugh and joke, who could smile and play. It was, in essence, a goodbye to hope.



Slowly, I turned my back to the destroyed house, and walked away into the darkness.


i can just read that over and over *sighs*

Reviewer: dark_dreamer
Date: 12/11/07 0:49
Chapter: one-shot

wow. that was an amazing story. i loved the part where harry was born . it was pure genius.

i felt tears in my eyes when i read the last paragraph of sirus' thoughts when he said bye. it was so beautiful, yet so sad.

anyway i will love to read more of your sotries. well done *claps*

Reviewer: R_U_LDS_2
Date: 11/10/07 13:08
Chapter: one-shot

i loved this story sooo much. you captured it so perfectly.

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review! I'm glad you liked it. PS Awesome pen name. I am LDS too.

Reviewer: slydoggy13
Date: 11/09/07 12:13
Chapter: one-shot

omg i'm crying right now that was so sweet.

Author's Response: =) Thanks for the review *tosses over tissues*

Reviewer: cobezxo93
Date: 09/21/07 14:19
Chapter: one-shot

omg! that was really amazing! i actually got tears in my eye!

Author's Response: hehe thank you for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Marauder Wannabe
Date: 09/14/07 9:19
Chapter: one-shot

No matter how many times I read this, it always makes me cry.
I absolutely love this story and I could read it forever.


Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely review! =)

Reviewer: Marauder Wannabe
Date: 09/14/07 9:18
Chapter: one-shot

No matter how many times I read this, it always makes me cry.
I absolutely love this story and I could read it forever.

Reviewer: Annabella Cullen
Date: 09/10/07 0:42
Chapter: one-shot

.......wow. tear.

Author's Response: =)

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