Reviews For Why? (I'm No-One)
Reviewer: Nordanvinden
Date: 12/05/08 18:17
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

Awe, what a wonderful one-shot, I really liked it!

Great plot and the character portrayal of Hermione and Cedric were great, especially Cedric's, lol!

More so, the interaction between them was pretty great as well!

And the fic was also very well written!

Good job!

Reviewer: tomfelton lover xo
Date: 09/09/07 19:20
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

that was saaaaaaad!

Well, not the story, but I'm a reader who reads between the lines and after the lines and i thoguht about after he died and-and..... WAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! :'(

Reviewer: dollfaceDISASTER
Date: 08/17/07 9:29
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

Awe, that was so cute. :)

Reviewer: jinx_pickle_jinx
Date: 07/14/07 16:26
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

awwwwwww this is so sad because he died!!!

Reviewer: hagrids_beard
Date: 05/26/07 19:21
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

I really like your story hopefully there will more chapters in the future!?!

Reviewer: Saddie
Date: 03/31/07 4:40
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

good i definently want to see more

Reviewer: Saddie
Date: 03/31/07 4:40
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

good i definently want to see more

Reviewer: mils
Date: 03/04/07 11:40
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

wow thats so sweet, love it!!! why'd he have to go and die!!! i like this pairing.
loadsa luv

Reviewer: The Slytherin Queen
Date: 02/23/07 0:44
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

I love it. You don't really see many Cedric/Hermione fics, ya know? But this is awesome!

Reviewer: aroraCrow
Date: 12/29/06 23:34
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

when you write the story this is a great pairing but only when you do it
love ya by

Reviewer: fuckmeimdead
Date: 11/14/06 21:01
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

Cute. I like the story. Too bad he dies in the end though.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 10/22/06 22:57
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

I remember reading this story on your LJ a while ago. Iím glad you decided to post it to MNFF because itís a sweet little story. The banter between Cedric and Hermione, while perhaps not in quite in character for Hermione as we often see her in the books, is just lovable.

The way you interpreted the prompt was pretty original, too Ė at least, I thought so. The fact that all these boys see different things in Hermione, but somehow Cedric sees the real her (or at least something captivating) was nice. Because of you Iíve been a closet Cedric/Hermione shipper for a while now.

The flashbacks work really well with the present tense at the Yule Ball, I think. And the part at the end where he admits that he really wanted to ask her and they dance was possibly my favorite. Possibly not. But I like the idea that this is what happened after she stormed away ó after all, we donít really know what happened. I like your versatility in scenes; you showed what happened after she stormed away Viktory style and now itís...Cedric/Hermione style.

Any corrections I might make are a matter of your personal style, so I wouldnít ask you to change that and even if it were important you probably wouldnít, so...I curb my natural tendency to nitpick in respect of that.

And PS: In case it wasn't clear, I like this story and I'm glad you're posting things to MNFF again. And now I'm done being random-like and wandery and disturbing your fragile peace.

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/21/06 23:50
Chapter: Why? (I'm No-One)

Oh... That was beautiful. I love how you described Cedric - he seems so... Cedric-ish, and that's great. This is the first one of these I've read, but I enjoyed it greatly. I love the envolvement with dancing and things... Brava!


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