Reviews For On Boundary Lines
Reviewer: Unicorns_Rule
Date: 11/01/07 20:33
Chapter: Sixteen

Great story! But Charolette doesn't seem like a Slytherin.

Author's Response: Yes, well, this story is going in a different direction than I had hoped. Charlotte was originally made out to be a more subtle Bellatrix, and then along the way she just...changed. So now the plotline doesn't really fit perfectly with her persona, as it had in the past. However, I think if you look closely you'll see some Slytherin in her. I like to think she's ambitious, she's independant, maybe sly when she wants to be, not exactly a totally friendly person...eh...thanks for your review, though!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/20/07 15:59
Chapter: Eleven

good, but I think that charlotte is a bit boring. However, that is what makes her so different from most of the OCs here at MNFF. Thoguh she's plain, she's differnt and stands out.

Author's Response: She's gonna get interesting soon...there's a twist with Charlotte heading your way. I hope you liked the story, and thanks for your review! Charlotte is one of my favorite OCs, and I personally think she is different. Thanks again!

Reviewer: misundersnape
Date: 04/16/07 1:18
Chapter: Thirteen and Fourteen

Where oh where is this heading? I'm certainly intrigued. And who could blame Charlotte for her crush on Severus, completely understandable... ;) She doesn't have a lot of natural curiosity about her does she, to get to fourth year and not have heard of Voldypants? Does she get more interested from now on? Update soon, I need to know more...

Author's Response: I'll try to update quicker than this time...thanks!

Reviewer: blackpaw93
Date: 01/22/07 21:37
Chapter: Twelve

Wow, I love it so far. Don't stop this, it's very good.

I usually don't read Trio Era but this is a very nice story. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! You're really encouraging.

Reviewer: later
Date: 01/07/07 14:18
Chapter: Twelve

i can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thankies!

Reviewer: later
Date: 01/06/07 23:28
Chapter: Eleven

i liked this chapter and i think you have an interesting point of view. however i am curious about the "diabetes" comment. what type of diabetes is it type 1 or type 2... i'm only curious because i have type 1. cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks...and it's Type 1 diabetes.

Reviewer: BellaMurte
Date: 11/14/06 17:40
Chapter: Eleven

First reviewer ever!!!! This means I am not a beta beta!!!!!!! I can't wait to get started on chapta 2 baby!!!!! Much love, Katie

Author's Response: Thanks!

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