Reviews For Moving On
Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx
Date: 11/06/10 3:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nicely written. I really like your poems, Cyndi, they're really good. What I like about poetry is that it doesn't take an age to read them. Sometimes I don't have the time to sit down and read a one-shot even, but I want to read something fanfictiony, and I usually choose a poem. You're really talented and I hope that one day I can write poems that are as good as yours. :D

~Soraya~

Author's Response: I'm glad that someone is getting some enjoyment from my poems. It has been a long time since anyone has read any of them, and I'm having a lot of fun reading your reviews. :) I know what you mean about having time to read long stories. A lot of my work is pulled from real life, but I have had fun adjusting them to fit on these boards. Thanks again for the great reviews. I'm glad you've had fun reading them. Cyns

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 11/25/06 10:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Never sent this one to me! It is a great poem! 8)

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I was really happy with the way it turned out, and you weren't around the night I wrote it, and had to get it turned in. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 11/15/06 10:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely poem! You can really feel a sense of determination to face the changes of a post-HBP world, particularly by the end. I like the form, especially the final rhyming couplet - it wraps it up nicely. You really do have a skill for poetry! Nice job! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it. This was my first poem that I posted just by itself. I'm glad it is getting some enjoyment! Cyns

Reviewer: Mudblood428
Date: 11/15/06 8:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely poem! :) I really like the sonnet format (I think that's a sonnet - 4 quatrains and a couplet, right?) and your rhyme scheme was well handled. Very moving!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have no idea what the format is...I didn't do anything on purpose, but that is how it came to me. :) Thank you so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Mudblood428
Date: 11/15/06 8:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely poem! :) I really like the sonnet format (I think that's a sonnet - 4 quatrains and a couplet, right?) and your rhyme scheme was well handled. Very moving!

Author's Response: Repeat, see above! :)

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