Reviews For For Lily
Reviewer: Phoebe Gruzelier
Date: 04/04/08 8:39
Chapter: Resignation to Determination

Oooh, you have my interest hooked! I am very interested to see what direction this story is going to go. At the moment, I'm still not sure.

So the prologue wasn't real? Typical Voldermort. That minipulative prat.

At the moment, I'm a little bit confused about what's happened, which of Petunia's memories are real etc etc. But I'm sure that's intended, and it'll become clear eventually.

Two things:
'...but speak sense'----- it sounds awkward the way he says it.

'...messed with...'---- That doesn't sound like Sev talking, somehow.

In particular, I liked Snape's story, the way it was similar to Canon, but completely different at the same time. Just as AU is supposed to be. I also liked the way that even thought she isn't a witch, Lily is far more interesting to Snape than Petunia.

Great story. Looking forward to the next installment.

And remember: Keeeeeeeeeep Writing!

Author's Response: =D Thanks! Writing Snape (especially his dialogue!) always throws me - I'll definitely take your suggestions concerning that. And, now the website's up again, I should be submitting the next chapter... soon. Hehe. Anyway, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 10/21/07 11:52
Chapter: Prologue

Whoa, never thought of that one. Nice job.

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Phoebe Gruzelier
Date: 08/18/07 10:14
Chapter: Prologue

It was interesting. It's nice reading about a main character who ISN'T brave. case point: Harry, Ron, Hermy, Nev-Nev, Loony, Dumbledore, Snape and Moldie Voldie are all brave (in one form or another).

It was quite a poiniant (not quite sure how you spell it) story. I liked the way it showed a slightly different side to smelly old Pertunia Dursley, while still keeping her in character. Well done!

Author's Response: :D I'm glad you enjoyed this fic! Thanks so much for the nice review!!

Reviewer: SecretSouthernGurl11
Date: 12/23/06 17:23
Chapter: Prologue

I cant believe Petunia would do tht!!Im very impressed tht you wrote about Petunia, shes rather hard to write about!! And im surpirsed tht she did tht to her own sister!!! I would have dided for her!!! LOL Anyway its writen amazingly and i like tht Petunia is the witch in the story!! It shows a side of her no one has seen

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it was rather hard for me to write Petunia being so... cowardly (I love her!). I'm so glad you liked this story!

Reviewer: SecretSouthernGurl11
Date: 12/23/06 17:21
Chapter: Prologue

I dont know what to say..... I cant beleive Petunia would do that!!! She should noe tht nothing can bring the dead back to life!! But i do like this story its really well writin. LOL

Author's Response: ... oops...

Reviewer: SecretSouthernGurl11
Date: 12/23/06 17:19
Chapter: Prologue

I dont know what to say..... I cant beleive Petunia would do that!!! She should noe tht nothing can bring the dead back to life!! But i do like this story its really well writin. LOL

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like this story!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 11/20/06 13:17
Chapter: Prologue

I really like how you wrote this story. You had probably the hardest character of all....why would Voldemort even let a Muggle into his presence! I'm impressed that you were able to get this far with such a difficult character! :) It was fun to read.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Petunia did seem pretty hard, although making it AU was, of course, a HUGE help. I feel kinda cowardly now, though... Oh well, thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 11/17/06 20:48
Chapter: Prologue

0_0 You are a brave soul to write a story about Petunia! That's amazing. I can't believe Voldemort let a muggle join... this is a truly fantastic, well-written, and well-characterised story that uses an unlikeable character and forces the reader to sympathise with her.
That takes skill.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! Actually... I chickend out... Petunia's a witch in this story... I guess I should make that more obvious... Anyway... again, thanks so much for the review!

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