Reviews For Come Undone
Reviewer: wendelin the wierd
Date: 10/01/08 8:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

*Giggles* Nothing in particular but I actually happen to really like him. This fic was written for a challenge where we had to devise a game based on a fic by some other author. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 04/22/08 17:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Reading this very peculiar fic was a very surreal experience. Oh, and what did Neville ever do to you?

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 11/27/06 13:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, so you changed my ending so that Draco is alive at the end?!?! -giggles- Thanks for picking my story. I loved the cute little additions of the monsters. And of course you had to mention Wrackspurts! *hugs*


Author's Response: I don't know what my obsession with them is! *HUGGLES BACK* Thanks for leaving this review and... congratulations!

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 11/19/06 21:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like the way you've told the story at the same time as instructing the player how to complete the levels. It seems like a video game that I myself would play, and that of course, was part of the challenge. I think, by incorporating the controls into the tutorial, you've definitely given it that manual feel. Good luck in the Challenge!

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving this review! Congratulatons on coming first! You did a splendid job on your entry!

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