Oh, wendelin, this was really good. it's not like most poetry with its rhymes and rhythms and MUST BE IN ORDER type mentalities. It's very refreshing. I typically never read poetry, but this was quite good. I really enjoyed it, and I must say, you should write poetry more often. :)

Wow. Beautifully eloquent.
I was scanning it to put my favourite line or two, (I always try to do that) but I can't choose. It was all equally good.
*takes piece of chocolate*
Mmm. Thanks.
p.s. I have several poems on MNFF as well . . . I would be honoured if you read any. ;)

Author's Response: I would love to read your poetry. RL is keeping me busy right now but I'll get to it soon!