Reviewer: potterstar
Date: 08/26/09 18:03
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

So ironic! Loove it. :)

Author's Response: WHOOOOA, it's been forever since I got a review for this! Thank ya!

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 12/14/08 10:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

OH WOW!!!! The whole story had me gripped for the whole time I was reading it! Awesome story! I LOVED the last bit, so COOL!!! You did a fantastic job! Cool!

--Nadia

Author's Response: Thank you SOO much! I almost forgot about this story. I got the idea from a weird dream I once had, mixed with a weird Scottish mannequin I once saw that reminded me of Lucius Malfoy, and I just HAD to like it. I'm glad you liked the ending! Funky endings are my favourite.

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 09/13/08 13:51
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

=? Order of the Phoenix? Interesting! JK should have put that in the book...of course, then Mr. Lucius wouldn't have been so sinister, and what's the fun in not hating Malfoys? Or...well, liking extremely disliking them?

truly hideous flowered muumuu

I've always wondered why people wear urgly outfits (of course, I watch What Not to Wear, so shouldn't I know the answer to that question?)...It's one of life's great mysteries, I guess XD

"I used to have an uncle named Elizabeth.”

o.0 o.0 o.0

An interesting story overall! I think it could have had maybe a bit more to it, because the ending was rather abrupt. I dunno. G2g!~

H_o_I_

Author's Response: I thought the ending was abrupt too... but I wrote it for a challenge, and the deadline was the next day! I was rather rushed! ^_^ "I've always wondered why people wear urgly outfits..." You know, if there was an answer to that question, the universe would make a lot more sense than it does now. Though I think the real reason why people wear urgly outfits is, they have clothes left over from decades ago when they were still fashionable and haven't realized that the styles have changed.

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 09/13/08 13:36
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Oh ho ho! What is this? Lucius is - apparently - not a pureblood? *captain obvious to the rescue!* Poor man must be experiencing quite a shock! XD

Interesting names, by the way. I studied Roman history last year and for some reason we didn't learn much about Hadrian. o.0

So...this review is really boring and short because the stupid hurricane Ike (which also canceled my Sweeney Todd rehearsal) blew out our power so we had no electricity or air conditioning and now we are driving to dryer pastures and I am REALLY BORED. =/ And my dad's computer won't play movies.

lol, sorry about that...^.^ ANYWAY, interesting story, it's not really your usual...um, style I guess you could say. *runs off to read next chapter*~

H_o_I_

Author's Response: Mwhahahaha, I almost forgot about this story. Thanks for the review. WHOA. You're in Sweeney Todd? I'd give an arm and a leg and my eyeteeth to be in that! What part are you? I've always wanted to be the Beadle, even though I'm a girl and don't fit the role in any possible way.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/18/08 16:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

Absolutely brilliant! I know i shouldn't have laughed when he got the letter in the first chapter because in reality that would be such a traumatic event for anyone, but it was a little funny. I was horrified when reading this chapter about when he discovered he'd murdered his sister and brother in law. I'm a little confused though, he woke up and it was a dream, but then he got the letter by muggle post, so was it a dream or not? I believe not because he wouldn't have gone to Dumbledore if it had would he? All in all a very well written and compelling read.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! He woke up and it was a dream, but it was true! And yeah! And I don't know! It was supposed to be mysterious... so mysterious that even I don't know, apparently! (You know how I love my wacky twist endings...)

Reviewer: x0BOO0x
Date: 06/10/08 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

How much do we love Lucius Malfoy? 10/10. Brava! Keep up the great work
~*BOO*~

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I adore Lucius... I dressed up as him for the book 7 release, complete with wig and cane!

Reviewer: EmmaTwitch
Date: 05/29/08 0:28
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

Oh that was funny that was! I love how old Lucious's first thought was HAIR
and also, the Peverall crest flatwear made me laugh...though i'm not sure why.
Love your story!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I'm a bit cruel to ol' Luci sometimes, but not, I think, unjustified. Have I mentioned I like your username?

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/09/08 16:20
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

“Shut up, honey,” Narcissa muttered sleepily and rolled over, hogging the sheets.
^^I can see her saying that. It's very Narcissa-ish.

“Welcome,” he said, “to the Order of the Phoenix, Mr. Malfoy.”
^^DO you think that could have actually happened @ the end of DH? I do now.

*sigh* My new goal is to read & review everyone of your stories, and I would be doing that right now, but my mom is bugging me about doing a book report that I have put off for a month and is now due in 7 short days. I had to pick the longest book my teacher had. 10000000000/10 {Becca}

Author's Response: WOW, you really are leaving me a lot of reviews! And I really appreciate that a lot. As for Mr. Malfoy joining the Order of the Phoenix, I don't think he really would join the Order, he's too interested in saving his own skin-- I think only finding a personal connection to his victims would really make him do that. But I wish he would, because he's coool... This story takes place durig the book OotP, so basically he never goes to the Department of Mysteries and Sirius never dies, etc.

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/09/08 16:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Ahh. Nice one. I loved Lucius's surprise and found it perfectly in character. Great job (as usual) and 1000000000000000/10 {Becca}

Author's Response: Ooh, thanks! I almost forgot I'd written this story...

Reviewer: leahsm2
Date: 04/07/08 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Your story is very well done. It is humorous and thoughtful all at the same time. The Family having come from France (along with a priceless artifact) was fun. Lucius matter-of fact way of explaining his skewered world view was also a nice touch. I liked the part where he recounts Draco's antics:
He was opening up, relating funny anecdotes about the latest pathetic mishaps that Draco had incurred upon himself
Even to his Muggle-born mother he showed proper disdane for his only off spring.

His growing consciousness of what he has done to his own kind is also good, as is his ability to go back to his old ways when he thinks it was all a dream.

His sudden realization that, not only wasn't it a dream, but that it puts his family in grave danger is handled with a soft touch and leaves the ending satisfying.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I almost forgot about this story. I almost have to wonder what Lucius thinks of Draco, because really I find it hard to imagine how anyone could be proud of him or, um, like him. (Oh, I am not a very big Draco fan... maybe I'll try and write a Draco fic sometime, because for some reason I have waaaay more respect for Lucius than Draco.)

rnI'm just kind of curious how you found this story, because I wrote it kind of a long time ago.


Author's Response: Thank you so much! I almost forgot about this story. I almost have to wonder what Lucius thinks of Draco, because really I find it hard to imagine how anyone could be proud of him or, um, like him. (Oh, I am not a very big Draco fan... maybe I'll try and write a Draco fic sometime, because for some reason I have waaaay more respect for Lucius than Draco.)

rnI'm just kind of curious how you found this story, because I wrote it kind of a long time ago.

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 03/31/08 19:23
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

AAAAAAWWWWWWWW! good ending! im glad Lucious saw the light! 5 phoenix's up!

Author's Response: Wowzers! Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked this one.

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 03/31/08 19:18
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

*goes to find out what happens next*

Author's Response: Oooh, let's see....

Reviewer: monaal
Date: 03/28/08 0:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

HA! Good job on the story it was awesome

Author's Response: Thanks! Wow, I almost forgot I wrote this one...

Reviewer: TheVFD
Date: 03/23/08 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

I love this story, it's already in my favorites. Did you make Lucius' middle name the same as Harry's on purpose?

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I love your username-- assuming it means "Series of Unfortunate Events." Count Olaf is the bomb. Lucius's (well, Alexander's) middle name is the same as Harry's because it seemed like a good, solid Muggle-sounding name... I didn't even think of it being the same as Harry's! Isn't that sad, I focus so much on the Death Eaters that I forget about Harry, who I love (except for when he's being played by Daniel Radcliffe).

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 02/17/08 23:19
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

Oh. My. Godric.

It was wonderful to see Lucius' cold outside stripping away, and feeling motherly love for the first time. It was really beautiful, teh way you made the comparisons between the Malfoy family, and Malfoy Manor, and Mrs. MacHamish and her house.

I have to say that in all the fan fics I have read of yours, this is the second deepest one, the first being Draco's Trick OR Treat. I wonder why it is that you are so serious when you are writing about the Malfoys...

But then again, I haven't finished reading all of your works, so I am in no position to comment.

Thanks for a lovely read,
Sainyn Swiftfoot, who gives you an infinity/10 rating.

Author's Response: WOWZERS! I am really glad you liked this. I love Lucius (hehe, I love Lucy...), and I felt like he deserved a more... noble story about him than that redonkulous poem or the Dark Lord's Blog, so I did this one. I guess I wanted to show a more three-dimensional version of the guy, because he's usually shown to be a total sadist.

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 02/17/08 23:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

Hypothetically speaking, I loved this chapter. Hypothetically, I loved the writing in your the first paragraph. Hypothetically, I really, really liked Aethonia Malfoy's letter. All hypothetically speaking, of course!

I have, however a small nitpick. In this sentence:

We found one fourteen-month-old baby with the same blond hair and grey eyes

Who is "we"? Isn't only Aethonia searching for the baby?

10/10

Author's Response: Hypothetically, I would thank you for your review! You are right about only Aethonia... I don't remember very clearly when I wrote this story, but I think maybe Aethonia meant 'we' as in her and whoever worked in the orphanage? Either that, or I'm dumb! *CLUELESS*

Reviewer: 17ginny17
Date: 11/15/07 16:50
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

This is very, very wonderful! There's not much else to say about it. I'm a big fan!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! ^_^ I'm very honoured.

Reviewer: flyingphoenix
Date: 11/03/07 12:32
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

OH MY GOSH! That was so sweet and it made me pity Lucius and I wish that actually happened! It would be so perfect!


Author's Response: Thank you! I wish that actually happened, too. Though Lucius did kind of make the right-ish decisions at the end of DH-- I'm glad the book didn't portray him as pure evil like in the movies.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 10/27/07 18:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Our Hero Is Terrorized By A Doorbell

woot! great! i knew it wasn't a dream! I expect that it would make him see a different side of things. I wonder how Draco and Narcy took it? *NARCISSA* I'm sorry, I always think of calling her Cissy, but it always turns out as Narcy! :P

Author's Response: Narcy... that is a lovely name! I actually have plans for a story that will involve Draco's perspective on all of this, but it may not come for quite some time.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 10/27/07 18:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

ooh! thats interesting! *must read on*

~*~ Tine

Author's Response: And wait till you see what happens...

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