Reviewer: silverdoe98
Date: 02/12/12 23:30
Chapter: Tidings

can't wait to read the continuation:)

Reviewer: cmbluey98
Date: 02/14/11 16:47
Chapter: Tidings

Yeah sweet more more !!!!

Reviewer: CharmFlicka
Date: 01/02/10 23:34
Chapter: Tidings

do you mean rouge, as in the color red, -or rogue, as in a stealthy person . me confused...different meanings w/different spellings...

your story was sooo excellent!!! :)

Reviewer: morning coffee writer
Date: 08/07/08 12:50
Chapter: Tidings

It was great! I like your ideas. It was sweet.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/31/08 22:13
Chapter: Tidings

aw i think i've read this before and I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: Stephallovertheworld
Date: 05/19/08 16:24
Chapter: Tidings

Very cute.... another winner!! I loved it!

Reviewer: elmo555
Date: 04/29/08 1:40
Chapter: Tidings

ahhh! This is incredibly cute! I love the way you write... I can't stop smiling after reading this. yay!
Thank-you!

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 04/08/08 0:58
Chapter: Tidings

Problems or question's I have about the following passages are below them, with a number saying which

Lily believed that the Headship together had been the thing to really make them become friends and being them closer.

1. I'm confused by this sentence. Is it bring them closer, instead of being them closer? Bring makes more sense to me.

“Woa, Lily, let’s keep things slow, shall we?” she said jokingly as she laid half on top of him, holding him to the ground.

2. In the above passage you have it that Lily says it. But why would Lily use her own name if she was talking. Also, it sounds more like a James thing to say.

...his thin sweater as he wrapped him arms around her.

3. I think you mean wrapped his arms around her. Yes?

O.K. , mistakes aside. This fic was excellent. I loved it and its idea's. Keep up the good work. 10/10

Oh, and extended it if you can. I'd love to read an extended version!

~ Parchment and Quill

P.S. Lily's fight with herself just made me laugh. It seems so much like me (I'm stubborn)

Favourite passage :

And the little voice in the back of her head sniggered.

Finally!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 03/18/08 22:51
Chapter: Tidings

lol! great story!! and oh my gosh it was so descriptive! i felt like i was really there!!!

Reviewer: Hope for Tomorrow
Date: 02/25/08 22:37
Chapter: Tidings

So cute! I would love to see a full-length. Nice touch with the wet-start fireworks.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 01/13/08 21:15
Chapter: Tidings

OMGOSH THIS IS SOSOSOSOSOSO GOOD YOU HAVE TO TURN IT INTO A CHAPTER FIC IT WOULD BE AWESOME


*lola is happy*

XOXOXOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 12/28/07 22:54
Chapter: Tidings

Wonderful. You know, I was actually thinking of writing a fic about Shiver, because its always reminded me so much of James and Lily! Well I'm happy I didn't because this was amazing, and I don't think that I could have compared. Since Jo Rowling also loves Coldplay, maybe she was inspired by this song. Hahaa, most likely not.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 10/05/07 14:12
Chapter: Tidings

awesome so sweet love it!!!!

Reviewer: CookieMonsterLovee
Date: 09/08/07 4:21
Chapter: Tidings

ohh i loved it, so romantic :]

Reviewer: Call Me Ella
Date: 09/05/07 13:59
Chapter: Tidings

YES!!! TURN THIS INTO A FULL FIC!!! This is soo cuteee =)

Reviewer: Raddish_Earings
Date: 08/24/07 21:51
Chapter: Tidings

aww... its so sweet!!! you should totally turn ito a full fledged fic!

Reviewer: Angela_Prongs
Date: 08/12/07 13:59
Chapter: Tidings

Aww, that was so sweet! I loved it! *squees* That's my James!

I don't think you should keep this one story going, but you could kind of make an on-going sequel. That way, anyone coming across this one-shot can have a fluffy one-shot for themselves without any cliffies or anything and they don't have to keep reading the sequel. But it would be GREAT if you made a chaptered sequel! So this one-shot could sort of be like a 'prolouge.'

Reviewer: lunarocks15
Date: 08/02/07 21:33
Chapter: Tidings

aawwww thats so cute i really luved it!!!!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/02/07 12:58
Chapter: Tidings

That was very well done.

Reviewer: SoccerHobb
Date: 07/29/07 20:41
Chapter: Tidings

that was a really enjoyable read, and you captured their relationship beautifully! i really liked it!

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