Reviewer: The Author Formerly Known As
Date: 06/25/11 4:35
Chapter: Prologue

I need to remember never to read uncompleted fics. The last chapter just left me wanting to read the rest, but there is no rest. Your characterizations of everyone are spot on, especially Remus & Sirius. Remus would doubt himself to appease his friends like that, and Sirius, I don't know if you meant to write him as Manic-depressive, but it came out that way, and it is how I've always imagined him.

Reviewer: lupin_remus
Date: 08/19/09 18:39
Chapter: Chapter 31

i have fallen head over heels with this slash. i love the way the relationship isn't rushed, the way it progresses and of course the involement and development of the other characters... :) keep on writing i am literally on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment

Reviewer: delirioustk
Date: 03/06/09 10:39
Chapter: Prologue

Believe me, I'm hooked. I'll be reading till the end! =)

Reviewer: delirioustk
Date: 03/05/09 21:55
Chapter: Chapter 31

I am completely in love with this story! Which totally baffles me because, as I said, I've never been a fan of HP Slash fics - ever! This just goes to prove that a well-written fic can attract even the most unlikely reader. =) Great job on this chapter!

I love the way Sirius + Remus's r/ship are progressing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yet again thank you. I'm glad I converted you. I like to think that I can prove that you can have slash which is IC and believable and has an interesting plot. I hope you continue to read an enjoy this :)

Reviewer: delirioustk
Date: 03/04/09 6:58
Chapter: Chapter 30

bravo!! great chapter....that seems to be an understatement though. Bah, i can't think of another word right now....

i LOVED it! it was just perfect! When I started reading, I could literally feel the tension in the room. :) great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) It would seem you are my only faithful reviewer at present but I shall continue to upload for you to read :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) It would seem you are my only faithful reviewer at present but I shall continue to upload for you to read :)

Reviewer: delirioustk
Date: 03/03/09 4:23
Chapter: Chapter 29

i never thought i'd read a slash fic but you've "converted" me!~ i'm glad i found this fic...sorry i haven't reviewed at all on the previous chapters! my hands were just itching to click the 'next' button!

luff this chapter even though i wish it could be longer. ;P i like your james - he's a nice mixture of trouble and serious. and the fact that you made Sirius moved out/kicked out in the middle of the semester as opposed to the usual 'it happened during summer' thing that now seems all too convenient. :) I can't wait for more~

Author's Response: Awww thank you :) Glad I converted you. I like to show not all slash stories are the same. Apologies for the shortness of the chapter. Originally I had this chapter and the next as one but it seemed too long somehow. But I am uploading the next one now so you'll just have to wait for it be approved for more :)

Reviewer: Briseas
Date: 11/12/08 15:43
Chapter: Chapter 26

great job with all the story, please keep it like this!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your lovely review

Reviewer: Briseas
Date: 11/06/08 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 2

Your story's good, really good. Thank you for that. I really enjoy it.

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 10/26/08 18:42
Chapter: Chapter 25

Call me dim but I don't get why they're so shakey. :S

Author's Response: It is more to do with James than any other character. He is freaked out by the fact that he has fallen from such a great height and landed in a graveyard, and the unexpected revelation of where he has exactly landed shakes him even more. It will be elaborated on more in the next chapter, compounding what the Marauders may/may not know about Godric's Hollow. It's prophetic and creates links between James' past and future. I hope that becomes clearer in the next few chapters and it helps you to understand. xxx

Reviewer: harrypotterfan4eve
Date: 09/01/08 15:15
Chapter: Prologue

omg this story is awesome. Keep up the geat work. I'm very impressed

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Expect more updates when the queue re-opens xxx

Reviewer: Burnseyy
Date: 06/17/08 7:21
Chapter: Prologue

awesome ! [: gonna start reading the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! xxx

Reviewer: Morwynninny
Date: 06/07/08 13:47
Chapter: Prologue

I love the subtleties of the this story! They're really, really, really well executed and the characterization is well thought out.
I can't help but hope for a happy ending for Remus and Sirius though! But how can there be? Hopefully they'll get at least one special moment before really bad stuff starts to happen.

Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review. I worked very hard to achieve the subtleties of which you speak. I wanted to make it as canon as could be believed so thank you. xxx

Reviewer: prince_george
Date: 06/06/08 20:58
Chapter: Chapter 24

I love this story.
I practically had a heart attack when I realised that it had been updated.
It is just so good.

Author's Response: NO! I don't want to be held responsible for heart conditions! :Prnrnxxx

Reviewer: Lioness06
Date: 06/05/08 8:47
Chapter: Chapter 24

I was very excited to see an update. It is never easy to hear a friend cite your faults and I thought the dialogue between Sirius and Remus was very realistic and genuine.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your encouraging reviews. I hope you enjoy this story for many chapters to comernrnrnxxxx

Reviewer: Lioness06
Date: 05/06/08 11:40
Chapter: Chapter 23

Awww...James...don't worry you'll get Lily eventually. (Though that was a low blow about Sirius not even loving his own family). I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: You are a very faithful reviewer and I very much appreciate it :)rnrnxxx

Reviewer: prince_george
Date: 05/06/08 2:01
Chapter: Chapter 23

I absolutely adore this story.
It is written so beautifully.
AARRRGH I cannot express how much I enjoy reading this.
Thank you for posting it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means alot to me. I shall update very soonrnrnxxx

Reviewer: Lioness06
Date: 04/29/08 11:51
Chapter: Chapter 22

haha...good job Remus - pouring your drink into Sirius's. I'm thinking that something interesting might occur next now that alcohol is being involved.

Author's Response: What self-respecting author does NOT include Firewhiskey at some point? lol. Thanks for the review!rnrnxxx

Reviewer: lupins_girl2006
Date: 04/28/08 19:39
Chapter: Chapter 22

wow Sirius really likes to drink...

Author's Response: Is this a good thing or a bad thing? Lol. I suppose that depends on what I have happen...rnrnxxx

Reviewer: Lioness06
Date: 04/20/08 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 20

Another great chapter...I love all the Marauder interactions, and James is so cute talking about Lily's different hairstyles. Detention should be interesting.

Author's Response: Got to love Lily and James xxx

Reviewer: Ravencorgi
Date: 04/20/08 19:31
Chapter: Chapter 20

This story makes me feel so warm and fuzzy! I love SBRL, but it’s so easy to go overboard and make it sappy and angsty. You’ve done a great job avoiding that, though. The chapters are short, but they’re suspenseful because you’ve managed to capture Remus’s thoughts and reactions so perfectly. It’s all amazingly realistic and canon, and it’s going on my favorites as soon as my computer stops malfunctioning :D

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I have tried very hard to make it as canon compliant as possible so that the characters we love from the books aren't dramatically transformed into characters you wouldn't recognise. rnrnI don't know when I fell in love with the character of Remus Lupin, but it makes me happy to know other people think I imagine him in a real wayrnrnxxx

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