I was reading this thinking it wasn't so great. I thought it was getting boring and there was no point behind all the conversations that Harry was having with the minor characters. Seriously, I was like ookayy.. how did this win/runner-up something? I was also thinking, okay so where's Ginny? Why hasn't she turned up yet?
And then I read:
"Harry glanced back to her picture again before his eyes traveled up the expanse of grey stone before him, finding her name engraved into it.
Ginevra Molly Potter
1981-2049
Beloved Sister, Loving Mother and Cherished Wife
“To my partner, my love, my soul mate…I meant every minute.” ~Harry"
And your story suddenly had a whole different atmosphere. The conversations were all there for a reason and Ginny hadn't turned up yet since she was dead. Man this was really sad. I cried so much! Not even funny.. was so sad. I'm really glad I read this and I want to congratulate you on being the runner-up and tell you that I think you deserved it.
Excellent work.
x
So beautifully written! You deserved your recognition in the QSQ's. My mum is asking me what's wrong because I'm crying as I type this, She thinks my boyfriend has broken up with me. Silly mum :)
i'm a loss of words....really this is honestly the first fic that has ever made me cry. thanks so much for this beautiful piece of writing!! =)
I feel really embarased right now, because I have had tears streaming down my face for the past 5 minutes. It was a wonderful story, probably one of my fave fics that I've read. And I've read a lot of fan fics.
Thanks
That was a great story! It caught me completely off gaurd. I wasnt expecting her to be dead. But it was realy good.
awww....
it was so sweet and so sad
I loved it
that was a really beautiful story!!! I am sitting here crying over it
do you know when you will write the prequel?
That was...ah...I don't know...! Literally, I have tears welling up in my eyes - the only fic that's ever brought me to this state...When I saw the bold writing "Ginevra Molly Weasley" I was like "No, no, no, it does not mean that - Ginny is NOT dead!" But she was!!! Really touching - but I loved it!
this was so sad, it almost made me cry. Great job
i loved this! you might think im werid, but this made me cry!
This was amazing.
I must admit that I almost cried, and this would be the first fic to ever have that affect on me.
Beautifully written - TOTAL surprise at the ending.
Absolutely wonderful...
Wow! That was so touching! I truly cried when i realized that Ginny had died. Great job on the fic! :}
Oh wow. This made me cry so hard! It was so incredibly sweet. I loved it!
Aww. That was so sweet. I was so close to crying. AND I was so mad when I realized that Ginny was dead! I was almost ready to stop reading it but, it was so good that I couldn't stop! =D
This was absoluty brilliant, I keep coming back again and again, just to read about Harry one more time, just to reassure myself that he did truly, completly, love her. We certaintly don't see enough of them in the books, and this seems to me exactly the way in which he would act. Fantastic.
