Reviewer: Aria_Aurora1
Date: 08/02/09 5:27
Chapter: one-shot

wow... seriously. absolutely loved it...
so poignant, so deep!
amazing (Y)

Reviewer: bettab911
Date: 09/30/08 10:46
Chapter: one-shot

Wow, great!

Reviewer: Shortone
Date: 07/06/08 15:09
Chapter: one-shot

FANTASTIC! I love the banter between the Marauders, and how you get right inside of Sirius' grief.. Excellent and its going on my favorites!

Reviewer: HungarianWitch
Date: 05/10/08 7:01
Chapter: one-shot

Oh. My.
This was just beautiful, sad, yes, but so brilliant!
Thanks for sharing it with us!
HungarianWitch

Reviewer: HungarianWitch
Date: 05/10/08 7:01
Chapter: one-shot

Oh. My.
This was just beautiful, sad, yes, but so brilliant!
Thanks for sharing it with us!
HungarianWitch

Reviewer: leahsm2
Date: 12/03/07 11:02
Chapter: one-shot

I enjoyed your story very much. I liked haw Peter was allowed to be one of the gang, fot the most part, except maybe in the begininng when he asks Jocelyn:
" “Shall I help him, then?” he questioned disinterestedly, as though he were merely commenting on the weather.

“He’ll make sure you regret it if you don’t,” she replied."

I also liked the Maurader Map explanation, and how James just assumed it was another copy of Hogwarts: A History. It's funny how all the studious students think that's a necessity, and none of the others do!
I thought the end was poignent when you wrote "An earsplitting, heart-tearing howl rips through the hollow silence of Azkaban. Every prisoner shivers in their cell as their despair is vocalized."
That sadi it all very concisely!

Reviewer: leahsm2
Date: 12/03/07 10:43
Chapter: one-shot

I enjoyed your story very much. I liked haw Peter was allowed to be one of the gang, fot the most part, except maybe in the begininng when he asks Jocelyn:
" “Shall I help him, then?” he questioned disinterestedly, as though he were merely commenting on the weather.

“He’ll make sure you regret it if you don’t,” she replied."

I also liked the Maurader Map explanation, and how James just assumed it was another copy of Hogwarts: A History. It's funny how all the studious students think that's a necessity, and none of the others do!
I thought the end was poignent when you wrote "An earsplitting, heart-tearing howl rips through the hollow silence of Azkaban. Every prisoner shivers in their cell as their despair is vocalized."
That sadi it all very concisely!

Reviewer: rrraacchh
Date: 09/29/07 1:14
Chapter: one-shot

that was so sad... but i still really liked it

Reviewer: rrraacchh
Date: 09/29/07 1:10
Chapter: one-shot

that was so sad... but i still really liked it

Reviewer: Beautiful_Black
Date: 06/24/07 7:09
Chapter: one-shot

How are Sirius and Jocelyn related?
~*PLEASE PLEASE answerI Really want to know*~


Author's Response: Jocelyn is the daughter of Sirius's Unlce Alphard. For more about Jocelyn, read my story Canis Majoris or any of its accompanying one-shots.

Reviewer: lia33233
Date: 06/06/07 19:19
Chapter: one-shot

Bravo! Great job. Really enjoyed reading this. Definitly adding it to my favorites...

Reviewer: real_life
Date: 03/09/07 3:47
Chapter: one-shot

Sooo sweet. It was good but some sentances were too....wordy.

Reviewer: farmergirl
Date: 02/16/07 10:42
Chapter: one-shot

OMG- amazing story. i feel so bad for Sirius now- they were all so happy, and now he's alone, again, and there's no escape. soo sad. you have lots of talent; keep it up. sadly, now im going to be sad for sirius for the rest of the day....

Reviewer: spike312
Date: 02/07/07 19:40
Chapter: one-shot

Wow. Lots of emotion, great one-shot. Sequel?

Author's Response: Actually, there are three sequels. Click on my profile if you want to see them! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: padfootsgirl1981
Date: 02/07/07 15:14
Chapter: one-shot

Wow! I really loved this. I liked how you introduced the Marauder's Map. I absolutely adored the little digs at James concerning Lily, they really made me laugh. Very good story!

Reviewer: Lady Carmilla
Date: 02/04/07 11:28
Chapter: one-shot

Wow. That was awesome. I love how it was emotional on all ends of the spectrum. If that makes sense... Lol. Anyways, very good. And sad. But in a good way..? Ok, I should stop before I confuse myself more. =]

Reviewer: allura mystique
Date: 02/03/07 17:02
Chapter: one-shot

*crying* That was sad...but the memory of that Christmas was really sweet...it made me laugh at times. Really sad, though...great story.

Reviewer: NIcerDraco2025
Date: 02/03/07 15:31
Chapter: one-shot

So much emotion...this is so good.

Reviewer: Marzenie
Date: 02/03/07 12:42
Chapter: one-shot

This is gorgeous. I love the way it turned out. (Someday I'll be able to come up with a coherent, useful comment, I swear.)

Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot coming from you, you know. (*laughs* Yeah, probably the same day I come up with one. Still, encouragement is *always* welcome!)

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