Reviews For Hero
Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/23/08 20:50
Chapter: Hero

wow, your really good at writing poems! I love the way you described wormtails thoughts and how he felt about sirius. I think it would be so like wormtail to fancy himself as a hero. I also think that what sirius said Don't let him touch me, Remus. / I might catch it." would be something sirius would definitely say. I think that was one the best though out lines in the poem! GREAT job!

Reviewer: Pottergirl6
Date: 12/15/07 12:13
Chapter: Hero

This is really good!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 02/19/07 20:44
Chapter: Hero

Very intriguing - Peter would fancy himself a hero, wouldn't he?

This is a great fic - just a ton of emotion from the character people never really delve into. You really brought out his true feelings and portrayed them canon-ly. (I don't care that 'canon-ly' is not a word.)

I love how you showed what Peter heard Remus and Sirius say: Little Wormtail! / Not good enough for me. / Don't let him touch me, Remus. / I might catch it.

Very clever on your part. :-)

Here is another great part:
he attacks
a snake in the grass.


Very nice description of Voldy. :-)

I love how you ended it, talking about perception. Sirius perceived Peter with hatred (me too! me too!) but the rest of the world perceived him as a hero.

Remus is right - perception matters.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates


Author's Response: yay! a review *cheers* I'm so glad you liked it- the line about 'don't let him touch me remus/I might catch it' was actually my favorite in the entire line in the entire poem, maybe one of my favorite poem lines ever, so I'm really glad you liked it! And I hate Peter too, so it was a bit of a stretch, but I'm glad it turned out well! Thanks for the review!

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