Reviewer: parakeetsrox
Date: 07/05/08 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Odder than Me

i likw it!

Reviewer: acciomagic
Date: 04/18/08 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Charmed Circles

My favorite chapter of the whole great story!

Reviewer: chasing_willow
Date: 09/30/07 4:05
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Mother Eagle

I really like your story.
I love Luna - she's amazing and you've written her well.
I do however suggest you run the whole thing through the spell check or better yet - a beta.
All I can name off the top of my head right this instant is *appArated (you kept putting an e there), but should you desire so, I can present you with a corrected copy of your fanfic within a day or less.
The tendency to bear twins can only be passed down maternally (meaning that Penelope's family had to have had multiple births for her to bear a pair), no bodily fluids of the father can cause the mother to produce two eggs at the same time or split one egg in two.
Nevertheless! It was a charming tidbit and it made the story better.
- As did the Clearwater family names - very well done, I must applaud you.
Your portrayal of Molly is impeccable, I appreciated her not only being in the story, but being this emotional as well.
Should we expect more?

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 09/20/07 16:41
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Wrackspurts and Gobstones

A memory! Those are always interesting, but can sometimes become tedious. This chapter, however, wasn't. It was interesting, and showed some of Luna's regrets, like how she believes she killed her mother. *hugs Loony* Excellent story! I'll get back to it when I can!~

H_o_I_

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 09/20/07 16:33
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Blonde Boggart

So this is either Luna/Albi or Luna/Neville. (I personally hope it's the latter - N/L is my One True Pairing...)

I think that Luna is a bit too sane in this chapter, but it may be because her life is changing in ways that (posibbly) force her to. But don't ask me, I've never been married.

There aren't many things I think you should edit, but now that DH is out, you should consider changing 'radish earrings' (from the third paragraph) for 'dirigible plums'. Of course...that sounds kind of long. *shrug* Your pick. You are the author after all.~

H_o_I_

Reviewer: Talon_Strike
Date: 08/10/07 0:20
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Blonde Boggart

AMAZING, JUST AMAZING! I'm not normally a fan of "mushy" stories, but the HP books have so much possibility for people who have not known real love to find it, and you did that for Luna, and Neville. WOW! Keep writing!

Reviewer: Lilygirl107
Date: 08/09/07 14:00
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Charmed Circles

Awww! It's so Luna-ish!You really did a good job!

Reviewer: cloakxstonexwand
Date: 08/04/07 23:01
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Charmed Circles

awwww! how sweet! this is a really great story. Awsome plotline idea, very original! do your best!

Reviewer: tha_looney_one
Date: 08/04/07 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Blonde Boggart

This is for the whole story; i,ve all ready read it. you really did luna the justice that she was cheated in the real hp books. i must say, as much as i love jkr, i was furious at the lack of luna development. coming from one who derived her penname from luna, i can only give you my utmost praise and implore you to contiue updating as fast as possible. i am going to add somethig to my pro advertising this story and its captivating origanal character 'albi'. that is now my only luna ship. i really hope you read this, as this story truely changed my view of luna and the books for ever.
ta-
tha looney one

Reviewer: jinx_pickle_jinx
Date: 07/17/07 11:46
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Blonde Boggart

i love it!! i'm still kind of confused over a dew things, but i really like it and i hope your update soon. the only thing i don't like is that Luna ans Neville aren't together :((( i think theyre the perfect couple

Reviewer: Padfootsmoon
Date: 05/05/07 7:53
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Blonde Boggart

Albus Dumbledore Pomfrey? Huh? And Luna may have grown, but she really doesn't act very Luna-ish.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 05/04/07 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Blonde Boggart

good story

Reviewer: Siva2478
Date: 05/04/07 12:18
Chapter: Chapter 7 - The Thirteenth Use

oooh... this is awesome!!! i can't wait for it to be updated!

Reviewer: kingbobrules
Date: 04/15/07 12:43
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Blonde Boggart

Right, err... Is Albi Madame Pomfrey's son or something? I don't really get that, but I'm sure it'll be explained later. Well done for keeping going even though you've had no feed back - you really do deserve some encouragement for this. This is a charming and original fic full of intrigue and I'll definitely read the rest of this when I have some more time! I look forward to reading more; don't be discouraged, keep going!

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