Reviewer: elipsa
Date: 08/11/09 9:15
Chapter: Desertion

how much longer for the fnal chapter??!! i cant wait!!!!!

Reviewer: Lorelai Rose
Date: 08/09/09 22:40
Chapter: Desertion

WAIT! So... Draco MIGHT be bad?
But he loves, or doesnt love Hermione!?
He could be lying!
AHHHH! I'm so confused! I want the next chapter to help me understand!

Reviewer: LunaLuna
Date: 08/08/09 15:41
Chapter: Transformations


Reviewer: Lorelai Rose
Date: 08/06/09 22:29
Chapter: Transformations

Just going to say that I started your story yesterday morning and haven't stopped since pretty much.
I've finished the chapters that are up but I was blown away by this one. Even went back and reread it and printed it out!
The sex was perfect, and in good timing!
No need to have worried about putting a little loving in there. (:
Excellent writing, and you vocabulary is amazing aswell.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/06/09 18:36
Chapter: Don't Forget It

Ughhh I wonder who the leak is...Why, why, why do authors kill off Tonks..geez..LOL Sounds like the next chapter will be exciting!

Author's Response: Hopefully! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/06/09 18:30
Chapter: The Reports

Wow, three deaths was a bit unexpected, I am not that sorry to see Dung gone though...Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: harry-hermione888
Date: 08/03/09 15:56
Chapter: Don't Forget It

Ohhh...the war, the war! I read this whole fic and your writing is superb and the way you tie in Draco and Hermione's romance with bits of reality, namely the battle against the Dark Lord, make this fic more read and intriguing than the other Dramione fics. Please finish this fic with Chapter 42!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I've tried to make everything as realistic as possible. Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Amrei
Date: 08/02/09 7:31
Chapter: Don't Forget It

First of all: brilliant story!
I read it in a rush and from the start up to the end it was simply great!
You characterize Draco with view not just on his ohbvious actions, but also on deeper aspects and I love it ^-^
Hm, Draco and Hermione happen by accident to give a whole lot of evidence about their relationship away. They better hope no one'll figure it out...
My guess for the spy is our favourite *cough* Leglimens. First I wasn't sure if it was him or rather Draco, but well, he's an ass and I really like Draco, so I'll rather stick with him ^-^
Uh... a cliffhange. I'm really curious about what happened.
Maybe the Deat Eaters are launching a counterattack at Hogwarts?
However, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and hope you'll continue soon,

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you like the story so far, and thank you so much for the wonderful review! The next chapter will be up soon!!

Reviewer: sonja_hearts_jaimee
Date: 08/01/09 1:23
Chapter: Desertion

once i started reading i got hooked. but i was devastated to see its not finished : ( when will chapter 42 be up?

Author's Response: Chapter 42 will be up very soon! Thank you so much for reading, and please stick with me!

Reviewer: Snidget151
Date: 07/29/09 14:27
Chapter: Desertion

I love this story. As anxious as I am to find out what happens, I never want it to end.
When will you be ending our misery over these intense cliffhangers?

Author's Response: Haha, soon, I promise. :)

Reviewer: mkw1639
Date: 07/27/09 22:39
Chapter: Don't Forget It

you must write more as soon as possible!

Author's Response: I will!

Reviewer: tigress
Date: 07/26/09 2:47
Chapter: Giving and Recieving

u have like a really professional style of writng,i could even call u jk rowling!!! :o

Author's Response: Thank you!! Honestly, no matter how many times I hear that, it never gets old. :D

Reviewer: tigress
Date: 07/26/09 2:37
Chapter: Transformations

ur like the ''oh'' greatest writer here on mugglenet,like sooo practically ''omg'' keep up the good work!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: :D Thanks!

Reviewer: ilovvveeRonWeasley
Date: 07/26/09 0:41
Chapter: Don't Forget It

i am going to be very angry with you if draco is bad.

i LOVE this story by the way. LOVE draco, hes always been a favorite of mine. please please please write more!!!

Author's Response: Haha, that's quite a threat...But I'm glad you like the way I write him! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jursica
Date: 07/25/09 22:12
Chapter: Don't Forget It

Oh no... This can't be good. Still holding out that Draco could possibly be a good guy, but I don't think so. =( A beautiful chapter as always, though!!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it; just one more to go!!

Reviewer: diggorys_not_dead
Date: 07/24/09 6:01
Chapter: An Obvious Issue

Must keep... reading... Must go to sleep....
I just litterally passed out on my keyboard. Its 5am and I'm on chapter 26. You can write the stuff of JK Rowling. This is ridiculously brilliant. Thank you.

Author's Response: Haha, sleep, dear reader!! I'm so happy you like it, though, and thank you so much for the flattering review. I hope you enjoy the rest of it!

Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 07/20/09 7:55
Chapter: Don't Forget It

soooooooooooooooooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: myladymunaSFF
Date: 07/20/09 0:55
Chapter: Desertion

Oh that would have been a rude yet perfect ending. I started the story last night and I love it. Just finished seconds ago. I love Draco & Hermione. Perfect. You are a great writer!

Reviewer: lisou
Date: 07/19/09 8:28
Chapter: Reaction Time

Great story, just started on it and I love your writing, you know how to express the character's emotions pretty well. I really like Draco in the movies, I've always wondered about the sensitive and more "human" part of him and I like how you're exploring that here. Looking forward to my further reading...

Reviewer: Blackfairy
Date: 07/15/09 10:29
Chapter: Don't Forget It

Wow, thi chapter wa very intense. I really like how evenly you're distributing the climacting event a well a the important information. Very good and I can't WAIT for the next intallment!

Author's Response: I'm glad it was intense! Thanks for reading!!

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