Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 19:45
Chapter: Fight and Flight

I think that if he were real, I would murder him a thousand ways!!! No forgiveness, you damned, dirty, prat! God, this is excellent!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 19:44
Chapter: Fight and Flight

I think that if he were real, I would murder him a thousand ways!!! No forgiveness, you damned, dirty, prat! God, this is excellent!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 19:33
Chapter: A Matter of Sway

Damn, he's scary! There were very minor spelling problems but it was excellent, bloody brilliant in fact and you will be seeing me again!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 19:19
Chapter: The Fox

Compromises! Once again, I have nothing to say, so I will leave you with nothing but happiness!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 19:05
Chapter: The Wolf

Dense and a jerk...No complaints at all! Another great chapter!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 18:54
Chapter: Situating

I think Draco might be jealous! Ha! Just as he deserves! Another good chapter!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 18:43
Chapter: Arrival

Fast paced and very entertaining, as always. I have nothing negative to say, like always.

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 18:29
Chapter: And So It Begins...

Just as he deserves! Another brilliant chapter!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 18:19
Chapter: Reaction Time

Well, what was this? A tear from Draco Malfoy? My, my. I would feel sorry for him but I can't just yet. ANother good chapter, no complaints.

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 18:06
Chapter: Hermione's Mission

Ugh, it makes me ill, but i know more goodness is coming. No complaints!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 17:56
Chapter: Sweet Revenge

Prat! God, he's vile. Anyways, great chapter like always, will continue reading of course.

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 17:16
Chapter: Summer Suspicions

Some people never learn their lessons! I don't like that Orman or whatecever he is. Weird that Draco is the only one whose noticed, but great chapter!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 17:03
Chapter: A Machiavellian Beginning

He is such a git! My God, i would have pounded him into something good! Ugh, he's vile. But anyways, good chapter as always. Will be adding you to my favorites later.

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 16:53
Chapter: Reluctant Acceptance

Moody is so cunning and I don't like that Channing guy at all and i suspect that he might be a Death Eater, but I will keep reading to find out.

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 16:44
Chapter: Homecoming

His arrogance knows no bounds! It takes Malfoy to still be a bloated prat while injured. Anyway, nice pacing and great dialogue.

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 09/29/11 16:37
Chapter: Desertion

Great pacing and I love how dark it is, so I will not be complaining. I get tired of fluff with no violence. I'm a girl who likes her blood and this is good reading.

Reviewer: pucky_13
Date: 09/23/11 5:02
Chapter: An Aversion to Change

Oh my god!!! I think this is the besto story I've read so far!!!! My congrats... It's brillant!!! I totally loved it.... I think it's Dracos's best description.... I've always thought of him like that. Simply Brillant.

(sorry if my english's not corret, I'm Argentinian)

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

Reviewer: Twilight0Potter
Date: 09/10/11 21:50
Chapter: An Aversion to Change

Oh. My. Gosh. I definately just screemed at my computer... I don't think I read this all the way through the first time. It's past midnight, but I'm going to start the sequel. Now. This is fantastic

Author's Response: Ah, thank you!!

Reviewer: Twilight0Potter
Date: 09/07/11 21:30
Chapter: A Tentative Union

I read this a WHILE back. Until I started rereading it, I had forgotton that I had read it once... but when Orman came in near the beginning, I knew I had read it once. And Orman is STILL infuriating. He's one of those characters that you just really want to punch in the face. Very good OC. Any character that can make someone really hate them is really well made

Author's Response: Thanks! I worked hard on making my OCs believable and, in Orman's case, particularly detestable. Glad you liked/hated him!

Reviewer: CassidyLynn202
Date: 08/17/11 4:01
Chapter: An Aversion to Change

Ok so I know this story is an older one of yours but since I read it I decided I should review it anyway. Also I read the sequel before I wrote this review, but I'll try to separate the two for the sake of the review.

I enjoyed reading this story a lot. There were some slow parts, especially in the beginning but it picked up eventually. Your character developments were amazing. Most other fanfic I've read make their character jump from emotion to emotion. But with An Aversion to Change I really believe all the change of hearts and feelings going through the characters. Nothing seemed rushed and this is probably the cause of the slow spots so it all makes sense.

I really love your writing style. When you went from one character to the other there was a big change not just in opinion but also the view which was a great touch. You were clear and to the point, but also had beautiful descriptions to make the reader truly see the story.

The story itself was predictable, but nonetheless made me sad when Draco chose that path. So even though I knew it was coming, the way your story invested in me still made me upset with the outcome. I did like the ending because I knew it would always have to turn out that way.

Overall, I really enjoyed this story. I'm writing the review to your second right away. Thank you for writing such an amazing story.

Author's Response: I've always been a fan of the slow-burning romance. I love seeing the characters mature and the depth that they can develop with time. A slow pace is the best way I could think to do it. I'm glad the change of perspective wasn't too jarring. I didn't want to take away from the flow of the story but I still felt like I needed to show both sides of the situation. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!! :D

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