I really like your story! =) It's cute and funny and really captures the essence of how JKR wrote her characters... I esp like the way the last chapter ended, with Dumbledore having conjured up darts and trying to pop the bubbles on the ceiling...lol. Just seemed like a cute funny little touch JKR would have added, and a lot of the HP fanfics are missing those little touches that make HP so magical.. Your story has them, and that makes it great, so I do hope you continue to update, even though it's been quite awhile since you began your story... =) i'll keep my fingers crossed
Fenn, what a delightful story! I absolutely love your brilliant imagination! I had such a good laugh over Snape being turned into a fairy.
Your descriptions of the individuals in your story were wonderful. The vividness, made me feel as if I were right there witnessing the situation first hand,
I am looking forward to your next chapter. Keep up the superb work!
Author's Response: Lacey! *smushes* Thanks so much for your sweet review. I'm so glad that you like it. =]]]] *hugs* FEnnnn
What little snag? How is this a little snag?
Dumbledore never ceases in making me laugh. ...Or however you would say it. This is SO FUNNY! Snape the Blue Fairy. HA! I cannot get over that...
(I saw the banner for this on your author page. *giggles* I love the poem too, about the Turnip named FenrirG.)
This is so funny and keep the story coming!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Angela! *hugs* I'm glad you're ejoying it. =]
*giggles* Snape? The Blue Fairy. HA! Oooh, Peevs a real boy. This should be so, so good.
*mutters* Snape the Blue Fairy. Heehee!
Author's Response: *grins* Thanks Angela.
This story is absolutely brilliant! Very clever concept. I like your style of writing. It's very smooth and easy to read. Great descriptions with everything. Good, good good! Can't wait to read more of your stories!!
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Author's Response: Hello!
Thank so you much for your sweet review--I'm thrilled that you like my story and writing style. The next chappie is in the works, and thanks again!
*rolls on the floor laughing* Oh my gosh! This is simply brilliant!!! You rock!!!
Author's Response: *beams* Thank you very much for your uplifting review! =P I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!!!
Wow! Great start, Fen! I'm glad that all the help from the forums turned out a well-written story. (I'm qwertyuiop if you're wondering)The way you picture Peeves is interesting. Personally, think of him as the standard image of a ghost. White, transparent body, shapeless form, black hole-like eyes... ANyway, I'm very much looking forward to the next chappie. Do update soon!
Author's Response: Qwerty! *tackles*
Thanks so much for your sweet review! =D It really makes my day. I've always seen him as a white/transparent person with a human body and colorful clothes... =P Maybe that's just me!
The next chappie has been written and given to the beta, I'm just waiting for Schmergo to send it back. =D Thanks so much for your great review!
OMG!!! Snape is the fairy!!! I'm so excited. I had no idea this fic would be hilarious to the point of making me wake up everyone in the house by laughing so hard (though I knew that with your talent as a writer it would be fantastic). All I can say is congratulations, you've done it again.
PS: Is that your final wish? That made em think of the show who wants to be a millionaire. I don't know if you've seen it...
Author's Response: Melodie!
Aww, your sweet review made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. *huggles* I'm so glad you liked it that much--I wasn't sure if it would be funny, but I'm delighted that you think it is. =)))
Thanks so much, Melodie!
PS-I was wondering if anyone would catch that! I put it in on purpose. =P *high five* Good catch!
Howdy there, Fenn! (for reasons unknown, I'm feeling very cowgirl-ish today :D ) Quite good first chapter and the story as a whole is looking really promising. The only thing is, try to arrange your sentences a bit differently. For example, instead of:
"His hands were balled into fists, and he looked livid."
You could write:
"Hands balled into fists, he looked livid"
Inverting your sentences makes them more interesting and make the story flow a little easier. I know that you did this in some parts, but don't be afraid to do it more often! The dialogue was a little awkward at parts, too, look out for that! :)
Your detail is great and I LOVE this storyline-- it has hilarious possibilities! Can't wait for Chapter 2 (there is a chapter two, right?)! Nice work!
Author's Response: Hey Loony!
Thanks so much for your review, and your wonderful suggestions! I'll definitely keep them in mind! :) I really appreciate it! *huggles*
I'm glad you like the storyline.. I have a whole bunch of ideas planned out, and I'm afraid I won't be able to incorporate them all before the challenge ends.. But I'm definitely continuing this story even after the challenge! =)
Yep, there's a Chapter Two--it's actually with the beta right now! Thanks so much for your review! *huggles back*
Snape as the Blue Fairy - I almost died laughing!!! What a great idea! I look forward to seeing where you take this. The summary makes me eager to read more and I am adding this to my favorites so I get the e-mail when you update. I wish this review could be a bit more productive but the fic was just so much fun to read, I couldn't find it in me to pick at anything. Great job and good luck in the challenge!
Author's Response: Hello Nicole, and thank you very much for your sweet review!
I'm really glad that you like my story--and that you didn't die! I'm quite flattered that you think it's funny, since I'm not all too sure about my humor-writing capacities. =)
Thank you so much for your great review! Good luck to you too! ~Cheers, Fenn