I loved this so much you should relly continue it.
This is wonderfull! I love the way you write Petunia. It so well done. I love the way you start in Lily's childhood and end after the war. This is very good.
~Guchi
i read it again and it's even more fabulous i actually flinched when i read the part where Dudley hit his son, powerful and moving.
i read it again and it's even more fabulous i actually flinched when i read the part where Dudley hit his son, powerful and moving.
ahhhhhh that was great bloomin brilliant so sweet, grand puts harry in a brilliant light puts the dursleys in a terrible one even thoguh i did see quite a few typos it was beautiful ahhhhhh i love it your a great writer well done (don't ask why i wrote ahhh it was just that brilliant)
Ahhhhh. So, so...simple. So clear. So beautiful. I love everything you write.
Petunia's PoV is interesting -- poor thing had her family against her to start with, was never the "special" child. And in the end, closing her heart to her hurt led to the loss of her son. Dudley obviously isn't good for much.
You also illustrate Harry's growth in such simple terms. I love the ending. Gah, I love all of this. Harry's grown enough not only to forgive, but to love the helpless. He rescues Dudley's son, but in doing so, he also rescues Petunia.
Sight, like color and emotion, is something that can either be lost or distorted, or never even had in the first place...but you never really know what your missing untill you decide to open your eyes, and heart, to really SEE.
~The Tainted One
Wonderful. I think you have done a very well job in describing what Petunia might have gone through, with a witch for a sister and a wizard for a nephew. Good job.
This is both beautiful and sad. A well written version of Petunia's life. I enjoyed this very much.
This is very interesting. I really like stories that require thought like this one definitely does but I think I might like it even more if it was from a different perspective.
That was absoultly brilliant. Honestly felt my eyes watering when Petunia felt guilty and that ending was just so fitting x
this is a very peaceful way to put the life of patunia evans
Wow that was amazing! I love this story, the ending was perfect! Great job!
A really wonderful, moving story. I think it's brilliant. Great job.
