Reviewer: LoOnY_for_Harry
Date: 04/12/07 14:47
Chapter: The Grey Lady's Legacy

Really, really good! Excellent poetic language and a really touching story. Creative idea- I've always wanted to know more about the Grey Lady. Beautiful!

Author's Response: Thanks! I must admit to always being intrigued by the Grey Lady herself, and this was just what came to mind at the time. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 04/03/07 12:28
Chapter: The Grey Lady's Legacy

Nice job! You've done a great with the rhythm of the piece; even the lines that continue onto the next flow smoothly when I read it. This sonnet is dark, tragic, and completely unique. What a fascinating take on the Grey Lady! Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad the flow worked well, this was probably the hardest piece I've tried to write for MNFF. It was going to be a one shot, but the sonnet form just seemed to suit it better. Anyway, thanks again!

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