Hmm...this is an interesting story. You have a really creative imagination. I like your style of writing, too. I'll be watching for the next update. =]
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hopefully I can continue to write chapters that you find interesting. As for my style of writing, I have had many comments on it which leads me to believe it must be somewhat unique. This is not necessarily a good thing, but I'm glad you seem to enjoy it.
I was kind of hesitant at first but I think that I'm going to like this. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for giving the story a chance - I realize it can be difficult to buy into initially. As the story progresses there will be more explanations included.
wow you're a very good writer and you are a developing a very interesting story i can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments, though when it comes to my writing skills I owe a great deal to my Beta. The first version of this chapter was decidedly inferior before she worked her magic on it.
I love it! Very rarely do i find a story that I know that I will love following until the end, but this is one of them. Thanks for this and keep the updates coming.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. The next chapter will clarify things a great deal, and I hope you will enjoy it.