Reviewer: Ritter
Date: 05/23/07 18:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow...that's a really good poem. Amazing job.

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 05/23/07 16:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

omg i love your poem its so emotionally powerful and strong, is it luna and draco? you are very talented!

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 05/23/07 16:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

So dark, beautiful, sad, pretty, brutal. I wonder who it is of. Gray eyes hinted Draco- maybe Lucius? I didn't really understand it, maybe because I don't know who it was of. I still really liked the poem/story though. As I read the ending again, I was like- woah! brutal.

Brilliant poem. Great job. ^_^

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 05/23/07 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow...words cannot describe...

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 05/23/07 6:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was so sad but so beautiful Wendelin. Well done, hun, well done. :)

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