Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 04/05/08 12:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

This is so cool! Great job! ~Beckee~

Author's Response: Thanks, Beckee! First chapter isn't very good, but I think it gets better after that.

Reviewer: Ankh of the night
Date: 03/13/08 5:32
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Emma's Goat Is Gotten


Ivy usually liked to read on the train voyage as well-- Muggle fantasy books were her favorite because she thought it was funny how unrealistic they were.

I'm sorry, but I don't understand that philosophy. It completely ruins the point of fantasy. Of course it's not realistic. In real life some people can't get over the little impossible detail, so they miss out on awesome stories!

Author's Response: Aww, I just meant stories that involved magic. She'd be like, "hahaha, that's not how magic works! That's not a real spell! Elves totally don't act like that!" Because she knows they're written by Muggles, and their idea of the magical world is amusing to her. I don't know... I kind of agree with you, though, that totally misses the point. Nonetheless, for a wizard reading, say, Bartimaeus Trilogy or Artemis Fowl (VERY different types of magic from Harry Potter), it would be kind of weird.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/06/08 10:56
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

okay i loved haley she was alot like me especially the 'pokety jacket'
i have no idea who my least fave was i liked them all!!!!!!!
okay im gonna go read the next book now see ya over there

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~




Author's Response: Thanks so much! I like Haley, too... I'm a bit crazy like her as well! ^_^ Have fun!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/05/08 10:31
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which Fate Is Sealed With A Kiss

aaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that is soo sweeeet i like haleys plan but jordans plan worked a bit better

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Thank you! Though really, I'm not sure how well Jordan's plan would have worked without Haley and company there. Otherwise, Malfoy might have gotten into the school and killed people before Jordan got the chance to stop him.

Reviewer: mahogany_wand
Date: 03/04/08 17:50
Chapter: Chapter 5: In Which Christmas Isn't Really All That Jolly

Who are Ted's siblings? Anerway, great chappie!
Yay!

Author's Response: Thanks! Ted has an older brother named Nathaniel and a sister named Christina, both of whom are grown. You will see more of them in the third book of the trilogy.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/04/08 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 8: In Which Havoc Is Wreaked

oh my goodness i feel soooo bad for jordan *sad*
okay i loved those pranks!! how on earth did ya think of em?? wow great chapter!!!


ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Well... I seem to remember making a list awhile ago of the pranks I'd play if I went to Hogwarts! *Pets Jordan* Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/04/08 10:47
Chapter: Chapter 7: In Which Hogwarts Gets Its Groove On

HA I KNEW IT I KNEW IT tyrone and emma hmm y'know they kinda remind me of lilly and james yaknow hes all "go out with me and stuff" and shes like "no way man" i love this story

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: You know, they kind of do remind me of Lily and James, and I'm not sure if that was intentional or not. I do think I wanted to have one "smooth sailing" couple and one more rocky relationship...

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/03/08 16:06
Chapter: Chapter 6: In Which Ted Has Quite A Bad Hair Day

WAIT...HUH WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!? WHAT IS GOING OOOOONNNNNN?????

im cunfuzzed

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Well, Ted had his first transformation and his friends came to the Shrieking Shack to see him transform. In the teachers' lounge, Blaise Zabini revealed himself to be a bigoted jerk but announced that he'd never join the Overseers. Ted inadvertantly informed Madame Patil that her nephew, Tyrone, has not been going to his peer counseling sessions with Emma, and Madame P is not happy. Tyrone came for peer counseling on his aunt's orders, and Emma was flustered, but he left immediately. And Ted received a silver bullet in the mail with the warning, "YOUR FUTURE." Yep.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/03/08 12:34
Chapter: Chapter 5: In Which Christmas Isn't Really All That Jolly

aw they are gunna end up 2gether theyre a cute couple i love this story its so well done you really thought of everything!!!!

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I hope you like the rest of this... I think you'll enjoy the ending. As for Ted and Ivy... *zips lips*

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/03/08 12:02
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Tyrone Thomas Does Not Have One of His Better Days

ooh this is getting really good I LOVE IT

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: WOWZERS! Thanks sooo much!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/03/08 11:35
Chapter: Chapter 3: In Which Professor Potter Takes the Reins

awww jordan DOES have a heart
JA'DOR THIS STORY YOU'RE MY FAVE AUTHOR *there it goes again*
do ted and ivy wind up 2gether??????? i hope so

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you! I feel so honoured! And yes, Jordan does have a heart... he isn't the tin man after all! ^_^ As for Ted and Ivy, well, you shall see...

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/02/08 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Emma's Goat Is Gotten

oh i fell a little bad for jordan although haley is quite alot like moi exept for the fact that shes all tiny for her age and im average but anyway


GREAT STORYYYYY

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Yeah, I feel a little bit bad for Jordan, too... he's actually my favourite of the bunch, but don't tell him that. I'm actually a lot like Haley too, but there's also some Jordan and Emma in me...

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/02/08 18:33
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

aaaaaaaawwwwww adopt ivy that is soooo sweet i love this story the only complaint i have is...HAGRID DEAD HOW COULD YOU DOOO SUCH A THING
okay im done

tthfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Why thank you! And I'm delighted that you've decided to read the Potters' Pentagon stories. I killed Hagrid because I wrote this story long before DH came out, and I figured Hagrid would probably die in DH and I wanted it to be fairly canon compliant. Little did I know...

Reviewer: tanmay
Date: 02/28/08 13:59
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

best was ivy and jordan
worst- ophidius

Author's Response: This looks familiar...

Reviewer: tanmay
Date: 02/28/08 13:56
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

best was ivy and jordan
worst- ophidius

Author's Response: Thanks! I wasn't really counting Ophidias, since he's obviously a creep-face, but it's interesting to see who you like best. Most people who really like Ivy aren't that fond of Jordan and vice versa.

Reviewer: LunaTheLoony
Date: 02/19/08 17:07
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

Ivy is the best. I'm not to fond of her brother, though.

Author's Response: Thank you! Ivy is kinda cool, yes? But by "her brother," do you mean Ophidias or Jordan? Just coorious.

Reviewer: tubawiz
Date: 02/03/08 3:39
Chapter: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

Very nice, five instead of a Trio or the Quartet of Mauraders, or Terrible two Weasly Twins. Using an odd number like five maid the story more funny, odd numbers just are, I do not know why I just read it somewhere. Here's hoping the second and third are as good as the first. I work with students (yes I'm a teacher) and Haley and Jordan sound like two of my students from last semester. No the real people I know are not twins. I also loved the way that Ron's niece, not his daughter is the strategist. The adoption of Ivy was a nice touch (two of my dads sibs are adopted) Do you have an adopted relative or a twin?

Author's Response: Well, thanks very much! I always like groups of five... maybe because when I first wrote this story, I had four best friends who I hung out with all the time.

Haley and Jordan are both like me in different ways, and I thought it would be fun to make two polar-opposite characters who are both based on different sides of my personality, exaggerated.

I don't have a twin, but I have a younger brother and sister who are twins, and a lot of Haley and Jordan's relationship is based on what I've observed from them, even though my sister's nothing like Haley and my brother's nothing like Jordan.


Author's Response: Oh-- by the way, speaking of twins I saw you mentioned on a review for "Dark Lord Voldy's Shattered Soul Club Band," you asked if I could write a spoof with Fred and George. If you like reading about them, I have a story about them called "Long-Distance Extendable Ears" that you might like.

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 02/01/08 16:25
Chapter: Chapter 2: In Which Emma's Goat Is Gotten

I thought Jordan would be proud of his dad. And what i it with Ron's kid having the Lily-JAmes thing with a guy?

Author's Response: Jordan is proud of his dad... but he's so jealous and insecure that it overwhelms the pride.

You're right, Emma and Tyrone do have a Lily/James thing in away... I'm not very original. But I think their relationship gets more interesting as the story goes on.

Reviewer: go go ravenclaw
Date: 02/01/08 10:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which The Stage Is Set

Hello, Schmergo! I just came across Potter's Pentagon right now, and it's wonderful! You've 'set the stage' in such a manner that it seems natural that the Potters had two sets of twins, and that Draco Malfoy is a killer, and that Ivy is so sweet!

One tiny mistake though, if you don't mind...

He had called a meeting of the Order of the Phoenix earlier that day (he had become the head, which was quite a daunting responsibility) for the first time in over twenty years, and a surprising number of new members had shown up. Many of them, like Romilda Vane, seemed to have come just to get a glimpse of the so-called ‘Potter’s Eight,’-- Harry and Ginny Potter, Ron and Hermione Weasley, Remus and Nymphadora Tonks*, and Neville and Luna Longbottom.

*Lupin, not Tonks!

Otherwise perfect!

~Arya

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! The beginning of this story is a little cliche because I wrote it like three years ago, before I even knew about fanfiction and before I'd had much writing experience, but I've gotten very attached to the characters!

GOLLY GEE WHILLIKERS! I never noticed that particular typo before! *Smacks self* And apparently, neither did any of my other reviewers. Funny, I've revised this story like a bajillion times. Thank you SO MUCH.

Reviewer: Lyra Lestrange
Date: 01/23/08 15:27
Chapter: Chapter 3: In Which Professor Potter Takes the Reins

Aw! And yay, the Potters are adopting Ivy! Now she'll really be part of the family :)

Author's Response: Yep! I'm glad, too, although it makes the story a bit more difficult to write (not knowing when to use the term 'dad' and stuff when I'm talking about Malfoy or Harry, etc.)

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