Reviews For To Be Heard
Reviewer: AurorInTraining
Date: 09/06/07 17:26
Chapter: To Be Heard

Aww. That's kind of sad, but I love Ron and Hermione together so I cannot say I blame the ending.

Author's Response: Yes, it is a bit sad, but it couldn't really end any other way. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: AnaMolly
Date: 08/30/07 12:02
Chapter: To Be Heard

Usually I try not to read 1-shots because I like stories to be long…but I liked this one. There was nothing missing and you wrapped it up really well. Maybe Luna was a bit out of character, but the way I see it war changed everybody who participated in it. I think that she still had that quirky essence but at the same time a maturity that can only come from experiences she went through. I thought it was real sad how she finally had the courage to tell Ron, even though he wasn’t awake, and wished him happiness with Hermione. Nice little story *gives you thumbs up*

Author's Response: Welcome to the world of one-shots. :D I'm glad you liked this little story. And yes, Luna might be a tad OOC, but the war/growing up has certainly changed her -- this is several years after her days at Hogwarts. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ginnyhermionefan123
Date: 08/22/07 22:36
Chapter: To Be Heard

*cries* sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad

Author's Response: *gives tissue* I'm sorry I made you so sad. I hope you still liked the story. :)

Reviewer: Phia Phoenix
Date: 07/08/07 1:58
Chapter: To Be Heard

This is the fourth time I've tried to write this review... my cpmuter keeps crashing before I can submit it!!
I think this is a very nice little romance fic, but isn't Luna very out of character? She doesn't seem to display any of the weirdness that defines her in the books! I suppose a few years have passed, but when I thnk of Luna I think of a stange, out there, peculiar girl. but it is very difficult to write from her point of view, since it's hard to tell what goes on in her brain!
And didn't she say at some point that she thought Ron was funny but cruel? I wouldn't have picked her as one to fall in love with him!
One more thing: to justify the lyrics (I think) you had Luna saying that she didn't know if he was even alive. Would he be in the hospital wing if he was dead???
As I was reading her little confession, I thought I recognised it! I used to love that song when i was little!
All up, I had (for once) a couple of picky criticisms, but for a light little romance fic it did very nicely!

Author's Response: Ah, don't worry, I've had a lot of nutty computers too. ;)

Yes, Luna might be a bit too "normal". I've never written her before. However, she's had many years to mature and let go of some of her more "out there" ways. In addition to that, she has just woken up in the hospital, and is still a bit light-headed. Those are the ways I justified it to myself, at least. :D

I have nothing to defend why Ron would still be in the hospital if he's dead. Teehee. But, if you're referring to where Luna says, "Or if you're even there,", she means that in very loose terms. She doesn't know if Ron's dead, or in a coma, or has just fallen asleep. And since she just woke up herself, she might not be thinking totally logically.

*giggles* I still love that song. Anyway, thanks so much for the nice review, sorry for babbling in my response. :)

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 07/03/07 12:13
Chapter: To Be Heard

its a nice fic
wish ron could hav heard wat luna said
gud job

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! And maybe Ron didn't exactly "hear" Luna, but Luna thinks he did hear what she said. . . :)

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