*crys* That was beautiful! I loved how you made Trevor so much more than "The toad Uncle Algie gave me". He always was underapreciated, and it makes Nevile's constant search more believeable.
I Lurve It!! Good job, and Happy writing!
you really brought neville to life here. that is great back story, with trevor and all. i wonder if neville realizes that trevor protected him by gving him happy memories to feed the patronus??
Aw,it's such a good story. I can totally see this happening with Neville. NIce choice for the Happy Memory!
Oh, awesome! I really liked this! It was well written and kept Neville in perspective. I love how you didn’t have him able to produce the Patronus right away. I love the glimpses at Neville’s past you gave us as well.
I love this line: “First day at Hogwarts? More nerve wracking than happy.” It’s so IC for Neville!
This was really well done. It’s not too long or too short, ending in just the right spot.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Nutz! I'm glad you liked it!