Reviewer: Autumnroads
Date: 08/10/08 11:42
Chapter: Chapter 5

So, when are you going to finish this, already?

Reviewer: Jailbird
Date: 04/03/08 15:38
Chapter: Chapter 5

I love the plot! i could of never thought of that! keep it up

Reviewer: humyn
Date: 03/29/08 20:20
Chapter: Chapter 5

omg. i love this story. is there any chance of an update any time soon?

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 03/29/08 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 5

I really enjoy this story it makes me happy.
and im glade you added a translation at the end of the chapter, even though i wish the chapter was a bit longer i still love it.

Reviewer: humyn
Date: 01/13/08 17:26
Chapter: Chapter 4

i am so hooked on this story. i cant wait for the next chapter. please update soon! sean might be cliche, but i like him. his character is rounded more than a typical cliche though. i like that scene with his sister. please please update soon!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 01/03/08 23:00
Chapter: Chapter 4


Sorry, had to release my pent-up anger for Sean.


He's so... so cliche! Wandless magic! Street fighter! Anger management! American exchage student!

Come on, mate! What the [insert swear words of your choice here- preferably one that starts with f and another with h) was that?

I've fallen into the trap, too! These stupid stories are too darn irresistable!

Cliffy ending, though.

Author's Response: The interesting thing is that everyone thinks that in this universe wanded magic is the only type of magic there is. Why is it that Japanese magic, the legends of which are about three thousand years older than the English or European legends, is always forgotten? America is considered the melting pot. Why is it that we can have a million different religions and no one thinks we'd have just as many different kinds of magic?

Reviewer: computer mouse
Date: 12/09/07 22:01
Chapter: Chapter 4

i love your story; it's so interesting!! i know you have a life and are prolly really busy, but could you please update new chapters more frequently? it's horrible having to wait so long...

Author's Response: I am sorry for the long waits. I am trying to update faster, but it is a little difficult with a 3 month old.

Reviewer: WeasleyChick32
Date: 12/08/07 17:03
Chapter: Chapter 4

o my god i hate you. How could you just end it like that? You better update quick buddy or you're gonna have some trouble to answer to!

Author's Response: Threats will only get you chuckles, a few laughs and a longer waiting period just to see what kind of face you'll make. Well, not really.

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 12/08/07 15:15
Chapter: Chapter 4

It is good...I like. I want the next one RAWR.

Reviewer: Siriusly Mr Black
Date: 12/08/07 5:20
Chapter: Chapter 3

It looks so good uploaded! Hows it going with chapter 4? Let me know if i need to take another look.


Author's Response: I'm still waiting for chapter 4 to be validated.

Reviewer: declan06
Date: 11/23/07 14:43
Chapter: Chapter 3

I enjoyed the first three chapters. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: humyn
Date: 11/05/07 19:59
Chapter: Chapter 3

yea. you just made my day with this update! thank you thank you thank you!! i loved how sean responded to mcgonagall. i cant wait till he has her for a teacher

Reviewer: humyn
Date: 11/05/07 19:47
Chapter: Chapter 3

yea. you just made my day with this update! thank you thank you thank you!! i loved how sean responded to mcgonagall. i cant wait till he has her for a teacher

Reviewer: humyn
Date: 10/27/07 18:56
Chapter: Chapter 2

ok, cool. i thought he might have been lying to his mom about who t-ray's boys went after for some reason. nice to know im not just slow *jumps up and down in excitement* well, you should update really soon. ill make you lots of cookies and as soon as i find a way, ill send them to you over the internet! yummy cookies ... * wafts the smell of the the cookies tward you* (yes, i love bribes!)

Reviewer: humyn
Date: 10/17/07 23:33
Chapter: Chapter 2

t-ray's boys went after danny? i thought his name was tommy. was sean lying to his mum? i love the story, you should update soon!! i can't wait till sirius' kids meet harry!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for spotting that. I shall correct it post haste. Yes, you are correct they were after Tommy Ray. Again thank you very much.

Reviewer: PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 10/10/07 17:02
Chapter: Chapter 2

I really like this story! So very unique! I can't wait to see what Sirius will say when he meets his son and daughter! Post ASAP!

Reviewer: The Potter boy
Date: 10/09/07 7:59
Chapter: Chapter 2

nice very this sean and sara are actually Blacks? that's cool

Reviewer: Stallion
Date: 08/27/07 3:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

By the way, can you keep a look out for a story called: "Dead Regime Alive?"

Reviewer: Stallion
Date: 08/02/07 9:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Fab story, love the "Bushido" bit at the end. This is going to keep me hooked! This is an order: Keep writing, Cheshta San, keep writing. We all love some mystery!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm waiting for my beta to get done with ch 2 so I hope to post it soon. All I'm going to say so far is that this going to get interesting.

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